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Comments of chapter undefined of Professor Dovahkiin

Ptitkactus
PtitkactusLv13Ptitkactus

After weeks of rewriting the author started a new story ... I'm pretty sure it's abandoned :( I really hate when the author does this ... Hope I'm wrong.

Lynariz
LynarizLv3Lynariz

Author said hiatus

OrdealOfMc
OrdealOfMcLv5OrdealOfMc

I find the whole "I have a big dislike on interfering directly, so I won't" thing forced, as it is an obvious plot engine/armour for Harry and co, and maybe some other side characters to get some of that spotlight. I get the idea behind it, but I don't get the reason for its existence in the first place. MC is just that, Main character, as in, the character who should have as much presence in the story as possible. What you're currently trying to do, is bad. Making MC uninterested in doing the majority of the work himself, such as go around and deal with the majority of death eaters before Voldemort has any chance of having a corporeal body, is stupid, and takes away from the image you've been trying to build him as all this time. He was hungering for more powers all this time, going around almost mutilating and taking huge risks for it, and suddenly he has a hesitation to use it? I call B.S. He got serums, rituals powered by celestial powers, mystical herbs coursing through his veins, and studying Wandless and Eldritch(Mystic Arts), and he still can't detect house elf magic? What? Do you find how ridiculous that sounds? I would imagine that atleast the combination of Heart-shaped herb, and magic of variuos forms, (Skyrim, HP, and Mystic Arts) would give him a certain sixth sense when it come to magic. The very fact that he didn't search for a spell that could cloak him from the observations agravate me greatly. He, seemingly, is becoming one of those Betas MC who only talks how strong they are, while using none of the power they actually have. Please don't do this author. This is one of my, if not the, favorite fics of this type. It was great peace of work, but it seemingly going down, due to you making MC act like a beta, and not like a powerful and prideful dragon that he is.

LeProphet
LeProphetLv14LeProphet

are you alive author?!

Boroxx
BoroxxLv11Boroxx

Thanks for the chapter. Though i would like to see the mc to show some more backbone against dumbles, while i understand he cant get fired from hogwarts at all cost however the fact that he has to bribe, threaten or do somethinng else for dumbles every time the mc so much as sneezes too loud is getting abit redicilous imo, there are many more and better ways to stay at hogwarts some simple examples being making himself too valuable to be removed or simply being seen as an equal so dumbles cant move him casualy like with magical Power or political power

Primordiaux
PrimordiauxLv13Primordiaux

did you drop this story?

Lasagnaaa
LasagnaaaLv5Lasagnaaa

is this dropped? I hope not

Pro_Gamer_161
Pro_Gamer_161Lv4Pro_Gamer_161

Pls Update Soon Mr Author. I'm A Loyal Fan Still Waiting For This Novel

SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
SUBSCRIBE_MY_LISTLv5SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST

I like the story a lot so far. I also find this story to have one of the more realistic relationships of the fanfics I have read about. I'm also glad it never devolves into actual descriptive banging. The plot is good, chapters well proportioned and paced, quite frankly. I dony have anything to complain about. There are still a bunch of side plots too, like Ego sniffing him out. Altough the man is rather slow at doing so for a celestial being. As for the mc his draw to power and it not being so much anymore. Youre just mistaken not reading mindless training greeble for a lack of interest. Do keep in mind hes being watchef all the time, dumbles probably snacks on popcorn and flushes with coke as he watches his acts with Aurora through some ****ty obscure trick to get his rockers off, and he has classes to teach and duties to uphold. Do you really want to read that the mc is reading books all the time and schooling himself up? Its a given hes doing that. So please dont be butthurt that hes not instant learning everything he needs to win the plot and winning before he even gets to the end of it. Simply put. I like this story. Im also curious as to what hides behind the deathly hallows and if THAT will become an issue too.

LeProphet
LeProphetLv14LeProphet

Release moaaaar pleassseee

Drakiros
DrakirosLv5Drakiros

so for those who read the comments, I've been trying to search a good story with this kind of set up of the dovahkiin professor thing, when I stumbled upon a forum/website where the author used to post this there as well, now for those who don't know the author got COVID but there haven't been a definite update on whether he's fine or passed way , but within this forum/website you can see on a user profile the last time he was "seen" within the site and the last time was on Monday of this last week I believe but the author didn't post anything probably just swing by, now on his other work of the decent Lockhart on the last chapter where he said he got COVID and all that one supposed friend of his commented on the last posted chapter that he was fine just didn't get back to writing.

Ulloa
UlloaLv5Ulloa

Did Covid kill this mother lover? at least an "I am alive" post would be apreciated

Crafting_God
Crafting_GodLv14Crafting_God

Hope the author continues this story, it’s been great so far and seeing the mc finally recognising he’s not all powerful when he has almost no experience is awesome to see. How he gains more experience and grows the possibilities of his Skyrim/hp/mcu abilities should be great! Please return author!!!!!!!!

UndeadSage
UndeadSageLv5UndeadSage

waiting for more....

Zarosian
ZarosianLv14Zarosian

i love this... but where have you gone author-sama??? its been two months ;-; we want mooooaaaaar

THR3AT77
THR3AT77Lv11THR3AT77

pleaaaase make mooore reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

OddPerson
OddPersonLv3OddPerson

Come back?

theratking88
theratking88Lv5theratking88

dude you're still alive ?

Dragon_Incarnation
Dragon_IncarnationLv5Dragon_Incarnation

Hello author-san how are you? Please update...

OldPhilosopher
OldPhilosopherLv5OldPhilosopher

"5 days ago" man where yu at

Havoc76
Havoc76Lv4Havoc76

I question the thought of giving serial killers too much attention, because that might only encourage more wicked people to become evil. You could use Tom Riddle as an example of how horrible the Wizarding World treated him that he ended up becoming a Villain. Like how his mother raped his father using a love potion, how bad bullying in Hogwarts was, how he worked in Knockturn alley getting such a promising student addicted to Dark Arts, how he thought Hocruxes would make him immortal when really just made him a twisted wandering spirit. Also how he so easily formed the Death Eaters by offering empty promises and getting them to commit crimes so they can’t leave for fear of being hunted by both sides. But the MC should stick history and not something so recent as they would more bias in studying a killer that’s still on the loose. Study Grindelwald instead.