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Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel: Aspect of Domination [COMPLETED]

Rawr_Kitten
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seriously you truely want to push child smut?

Spike009
Spike009Lv4Spike009

Awesome start those eyes should not be Sharingan though. Kamui is ok but no Susano for her please. Instead make her OP in darkness aspect. Also remember one thing author she is going to be his Harem queen. So no matter what she should be the strongest every time other harem members come (except Mc ) Also Mc not having other powers would not be a good idea . Although mc is strong with VM , rennegan . This power are still not good enough in front of Infinite gem . Unless you seriously introduce them as unbeatable in first fight. Also scarlet witch is a must for marvel harem. And if x men universe is mixed in Marvel Jean grey as well.

DaoistSloth
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Are we just going to ignore the obvious fact that she could've put more people in her dimension????????????

Lonely_Overlord
Lonely_OverlordLv5Lonely_Overlord

Author mc is a Nephalem (angel/demon-devil) not a Nephilim (angel/human)

NjalLeif
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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ now do a first time mass release so we get into the story more..

RUE_12
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Those DAMN HUMANS XD HOW DARE THEY :D I really want to see Him massacre the humans 🙄

Spike009
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For me any other doesn’t matter . Scarlet witch is a must though

Spike009
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Also another thing for god sake don’t make him bear humans stupidity if they provoke him. He already lost his parent because of it. If he still let the like of hydra or general Ross dance on his head and do nothing I will drop the novel. The badass personality should be there. Especially his harem queen need to be extremely ruthless . And only in front of mc will she become like a woman in love.

Uncle_Roger_main
Uncle_Roger_mainLv14Uncle_Roger_main

well, everything is great except for the girl. Should have just killed her off with the sun bro. Now we have to divide our focus on 2 MC's plus she didnt even like the guy. Good lord why, why is this author so dumb? you were so close to greatness.

ThanatosGreekGod
ThanatosGreekGodLv14ThanatosGreekGod

I have a son?? Well alrighty then

Djabilong
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Is it just me, or this is the modified version of Superman's origin story?

Ryuu23
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Yes, Susan is clearly superfluous here, like the sharingan stage for the eyes of the rinnegan. And I'm a little confused, will the hero not hate people after that? Let the people of another world.

Une_fin36
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it's really mind-numbing 😐 I literally feel like I'm intellectually regressing. 😐 but hey I like to read so keep trying.

PleasantPresent
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The "same for me" at the end ruined the moment.

DiabolicalDude203
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So are they gonna learn magic? Or are you just gonna give them their powers

Alfiemooon
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it's only the first chapter and I want to quit. It's written like a play or script which is frankly, awful. Why write a book in the style of a play? Plays have actors to convey the emotion the words don't portray. Books don't have that, so writing a book in a script format is worthless. It's just random words on a screen that mean nothing; something, which readers can't relate to.

Icarus007
Icarus007Lv4Icarus007

Really? Supernova destroy whole universe? They universe so weak? Supernova at most solar system or Galaxy. Not whole universe 😂😂😂 or in they universe only have milky way galaxy.

DimondGold
DimondGoldLv5DimondGold

Since you said no more powers dose that include serum's and magic of stuff like extremist virus?

_Marethyu_
_Marethyu_Lv2_Marethyu_

harem

MarinXGrayfia
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little bit cringe

Reaper_2985
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why didnt she used kamui to send there parents to kamui dimension