Comments of chapter undefined of Re-Birth of a Genius. Creator/Destroyer

If you shot a gun indoors you wouldn’t do it again unless you had to. And special operations types often train at indoor ranges and such. They also probably wouldn’t celebrate the murder of a bunch of civilians.

Good narration

It is really adventure to choose this type of genre for first story.I really liked the storyline . At first I was confused a bit but later I understood the characters pretty well. I am convinced with method of writing also. Keep up the good work 😀

You know author, i hate you, please warn if there is a rape scene, or put a tag about rape. I hate rape the most and you kind if destroyed the start of the novel. I hope i won't see any more rape

Awesome first chapter.. got my heart beating.

lots of ungrammatical sentences. you need an editor. the story has potential, but it will only be as good as your grammar to nitpicky readers.

Blocking the villain with one hand easily. Being seen by strangers doing superhuman things. Them thinking of him as devilishly handsome. Showing powerful aura. Some girl with indifferent look and cold aura along with beautiful face and jade like skin. God, it's only been 5 chapter and you're already filling this novel with trash level cliche events.

Why do I feel like I am watching an Indian serial while reading this chapter?? it is not that it's bad, on the contrary, it is a good start. but anyway it was a weird feeling like I am seeing a serial.

Not bad narration and grammar is correct, but the punctuation could need some help. Especially Commas. I feel like the author isn't experienced with using them. Well, it's only the first chapter, but that's the impression I got.

Don’t forget to add in that the American special forces are cannibals! Some enemy forces (maybe some Americans too) in the previous wars started fantastical and gruesome rumours for the purpose of fear and propaganda.... they kinda blew out of proportion when terrified soldiers heard them. Cannibalism was just one example....

Weird plot, he's versatile but can't protect his lover?, you can even assemble missiles but you can't threaten them?, can the author think of a plot written in advance?

If he was really that smart/creative... He should have been able to get his revenge without having to die for it. Bit worried when starting a novel where they pump the MC up this much....

Terlalu berlebihan, ini terlalu aneh untuk orang yg sangat jenius, dengan otak yg cerdas akan aneh kalau dia tidak menyiapkan sesuatu untuk perlindungan si wanita 🤦🏻‍♂️

I love bro , you got it the prince of Morocco is evil hhhhhh

The idea of the “heir of the Rockefellar” family torturing and raping a woman for days because his father compared him to her bf… this is not believable.

OK

Starting is good

this where it all began. A story that's that is now repetiveish , but good non the less

See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire

Good story. But there are minor flaws. Try to fix them