Comments of chapter undefined of The Mysterious Black Magician

The grammar is a bit lacking and transitions from one topic to another are often jarring. Well, can't quit reading till we got this frog beat to death!

starting!!!!!! the author is Filipino????? good job on the english... 👍👍👍

So far this is an interesting read.

The biggest problem with this story is if that many major disasters occurred at once as well as a pandemic modern society would have collapsed and no one could have researched anything to begin with.

Not gonna lie i thought the lets turn back time where it all began stopped coming from stories in the 18th century

One day there will be no sister to protect, cure, educate, fondle [for those who convince themselves that blood ties are the only legit bonds between siblings], or tease. Then we will see a good plot!

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Why would Mc even have a wood sword. Thats just Stupid Logic going hunting with just a wood sword😐

Nice words. Asorry, i didnt realize i was reading chap 29 earlier. 😅

This story is alil rough at the beginning, but it turns around and is a good read. for all the new readers five it a chance and let's support this book, I want more chapters 😵

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

Is the toad like normal sized or monster 3feet tall sized? isn't the sword like wooden why did u choose those sound effects?

I hope this story is not another one of those that emphasizes nationality

is this novel Filipino made?.If so, you make me proud..kudos to the creator..😎

Thanks

See this! I just gifted the story: Ring

See this! I just gifted the story: Potion

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salamat

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