Comments of chapter undefined of Ascenders Rift

Just an advice: I think it would be better if you would use something different from “...” for when the characters‘ thought, if you use the same as with dialogue it becomes confusing. Sure, it’s not a big deal, but if you can avoid it it would be better. You could use indirect dialogue form for thoughts or, like other authors, use just ‘...’ for thoughts to distinguish it from dialogue between characters.

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Thanks for the chapter.

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The poor fatty Joe... Forced to lead the battle.

Thanks for the chapters.

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Who would have thought that a Wuxia Goblin is here.