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Comments of chapter undefined of Grandpa Universe In Multiverse [COMPLETE]

I_love_magic
I_love_magicLv10I_love_magic

This is bad.....sorry......but please practice and you will be better! The idea is good, the cover photo is SUPER COOL but the execution........ nah. It is just below average, rushed and quite shallow. Maybe after you wrote a few thousand words, you could try rewriting it.......after enough people commented of course, so you can learn from your mistakes!

I_HateYourMom
I_HateYourMomLv1I_HateYourMom

thanks for the recommendations, the novels are great 👍

I_love_magic:Hi! I would recommend to you "My House of Horrors", "The Legendary Mechanic", "Reaper of the Martial World" was good as well i think, "My MCV and Doomsday" was fun as well if i remember correctly, "Gourmet of another world", "Release That Witch", "I have a mansion in the post apocalyptic world" this one i will only recommend if you can some casual r*cism and a somewhat China partial setting but even like that i had some fun reading it a few years ago. I hope i managed to help! Good luck and bye!
Skepparn
SkepparnLv14Skepparn

If you won't even give the mc hints on his own identity why tf would you bother giving him one? It's annoying af and will probably be a huge part of your story just the misunderstandings from the identity ****

ReaperDZero
ReaperDZeroLv4ReaperDZero

Am I the only one who thought what the f@&$ it’s Steven universe grandpa

SlyImmortalDevil
SlyImmortalDevilLv11SlyImmortalDevil

Whole grand theft auto world was pointless. The combination of magic and muggle weapons sounds like a foolish thing to do for someone who is about peace. 6/10 for me, like the idea but not the direction it's heading.

IRascaLI
IRascaLILv14IRascaLI

if his comprehension ability x1000000 then he can be a dumbledore in a day you know he is op as f... he will eventually go to a world that makes him invulnerable to weapons then he will become op as great f... when he combines bunch of powers he will become op as greatest f... xD

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SkyNeves
SkyNevesLv11SkyNeves

Wht didn't I read this when HP book and Naruto book where still starting ongoing? I blame on HP updates😒. Anyway I'm loving the book and honestly as this came before the others I expected it to be iffy but d*mn Monke was amazing even back then😂. About the chapter it made sense to why it happened, it's like a tutorial phase before the actual beginning of his journey, it showed us his powers, what happens if he dies, and how to help the world. This way he will have more drive to become powerful so he can help people and also not die(it must s*ck even with the respawning).

dragon_marked
dragon_markedLv1dragon_marked

I see a lot of People saying, this story has poor execution but can any of you guys do any better

Daoist2aSIaX
Daoist2aSIaXLv1Daoist2aSIaX

Well the writing, the idea, and everything is wonderful, but I never liked their detail in religion. I came to enjoy the story. Just why do I have to see and read something that I do not believe. Whoever wants to bear the curse in the novel reads it, read it for Chapter Three, and this was very annoying and a crack like a curse. Although I liked the novel and wanted to read, I don’t have to put up with this nonsense 😊đŸŒș

ClayRayne
ClayRayneLv6ClayRayne

Thanks for the chapter. Don't drop.

Sage_HiddenBear
Sage_HiddenBearLv6Sage_HiddenBear

Gta4 and this are so far rather subpar compared to beginning.

newthings
newthingsLv6newthings

well mc is weak and doesnt know his powers, and author doesnt know what a demi god is

newthings
newthingsLv6newthings

why can demi god die from bullet? author?

SCP_UnKnown
SCP_UnKnownLv13SCP_UnKnown

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LittleDragon99999
LittleDragon99999Lv1LittleDragon99999

Author ever thought of adding a romance genre, pls??????

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

Rugh13
Rugh13Lv1Rugh13

The chapter was funny

DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv13DeathLingers

hmm

Noah_Camenzind
Noah_CamenzindLv10Noah_Camenzind

what can i say, this is just my taste

ReyShii
ReyShiiLv5ReyShii

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