MisterImmortal
This is bad.....sorry......but please practice and you will be better! The idea is good, the cover photo is SUPER COOL but the execution........ nah. It is just below average, rushed and quite shallow. Maybe after you wrote a few thousand words, you could try rewriting it.......after enough people commented of course, so you can learn from your mistakes!
I_love_magic:Hi! I would recommend to you "My House of Horrors", "The Legendary Mechanic", "Reaper of the Martial World" was good as well i think, "My MCV and Doomsday" was fun as well if i remember correctly, "Gourmet of another world", "Release That Witch", "I have a mansion in the post apocalyptic world" this one i will only recommend if you can some casual r*cism and a somewhat China partial setting but even like that i had some fun reading it a few years ago. I hope i managed to help! Good luck and bye!
Wht didn't I read this when HP book and Naruto book where still starting ongoing? I blame on HP updatesđ. Anyway I'm loving the book and honestly as this came before the others I expected it to be iffy but d*mn Monke was amazing even back thenđ. About the chapter it made sense to why it happened, it's like a tutorial phase before the actual beginning of his journey, it showed us his powers, what happens if he dies, and how to help the world. This way he will have more drive to become powerful so he can help people and also not die(it must s*ck even with the respawning).
Well the writing, the idea, and everything is wonderful, but I never liked their detail in religion. I came to enjoy the story. Just why do I have to see and read something that I do not believe. Whoever wants to bear the curse in the novel reads it, read it for Chapter Three, and this was very annoying and a crack like a curse. Although I liked the novel and wanted to read, I donât have to put up with this nonsense đđș