Comments of chapter undefined of 48 Hours a Day
48 Hours a Day
Little Bleary Zhao
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The problem I have with stopping time is that it messes up everything the air stop flowing and assuming that protagonists Body Works fine then he well breathe in the air and since the air is not flowing you will die because no diffusion nothing ,carbon dioxide will get accumulate around you
There is a fifth dimension beyond that which is known to man. It is a dimension as vast as space and as timeless as infinity. It is the middle ground between light and shadow, between science and superstition, and it lies between the pit of man's fears and the summit of his knowledge. This is the dimension of imagination. It is an area which we call the Twilight Zone.
The premise of the story looks like it'd be cool... but the author's rambling makes it's hard to stay interested. It's only the 2nd chapter and already i'm finding myself skipping whole paragraphs to just 'get on with it already'. Unless the author suddenly changes his writing style, i don't think ill be reading this much longer.
