Comments of chapter undefined of Alexander Rose : Rise To Stardom

YES!! when Jay Aslan dissipated out of thin air I was sad, I see that you said this is different but the same showbiz idea and I'm so hype, cant wait to read.

I find it good, the only issue is you ask me which could be making it a bit hard to read is the dialogue part, I find that if you can like mark the fact that they are talking by starting it in the new verse it would be even better, but overall good if you ask me :D keep it up

You should at least credit in synopsis or earlier note on what u were inspired from as the setting and plot where both heavily copied from Jay Aslan novel... The amount u did is also infringement of copyright... you'll prpb never be sued as the author disappeared into the cosmos, but the way u basically directly copied is essentially pirating, can be sued for court by any1 who takes issue since its not fan fic. Also I suggest getting something like grammarly. Some of your grammar was wrong and missing lots of commas. Anyways I hope u dont drop since Ive been sying for Jay Aslan continuation

😍 Love the cover. It's the main reason I'm reading this book due to the cover of the book. 😏😍

I’m liking so far as I have already read the Jay Aslan book which this has most likely taken at least small amounts of inspiration from, I hope that this book will pick up with time and not deviate from the main plot.

lol, for a moment there i read "axel rose". actually, that would explain so many things.

I wish u got rid of the system

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