Comments of chapter undefined of My Magical System
My Magical System
Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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freaking soul drug? since when physicists dabbled in drugs? or was it nanobots? or did she became meta-physicist? and how the fudge she carried such galaxy breaking invention without guards!? unless it was a solo project? in my honest opinion, it would be better just throw the system origin out of nowhere or tell it was from a fake god or something rather than this
how can you have a best friend and dont know or at least suspect his crap personalities.... hell my best friend (woman in this case) knows i can be a manipulative bastard, a pesimist, and sometimes a really crappy person but she stays as my best friend because i also have good qualities... but this dude seems like he doesnt know about it.... dudee!!! know your friends like they were your enemies thats the rule.
As I was reading the chapter, I was left with a phrase that I isolated myself seriously thinking about. The parents took the girl away from the main character ending their relationship and suddenly he finds her in another type of situation where other men take her away from him and he does not know whether to cry or scream. This situation causes me conflicts because the main character acts as if they still have a relationship, as if they are still "together or belong to him" in a more possessive context. This may well be indicative of the author that the character is very mentally screwed up after being all this time in isolation or the guy is delirious. It can also mean that the guy is mentally trapped because what he had with her no longer exists. what he has of her is a memory. But after all this it is still a novel. I keep reading and of course she remembers him and is still in love with him ... this reminds me of classic romance novels in the sense that they seem too good to be true ... I liked more the idea that he had mental problems and maybe the girl, although she remembered him, had moved on and the guy was the only one trapped in time. I'm buying chicken and I don't have the internet so I had time to think about the chapter. Have a nice day.
None of the logic tracks and the common sense is just not there. Maybe the MC is literally insane? Heâs the narrator, so if this is all just his delusion I guess it makes more sense. But frankly, I think the author just lacks life experience⌠And if the MC IS that kind of insane, Iâm not interested in reading his fever dreams.
