Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)

I hate kids in fanfictions

I feel that you portrayed a young naive stubborn brat pretty well

I gotta admit, I didn't think I could despise this Hachi kid more than I already did lol but you completely blindsided me this chapter. His arrogance is astounding which is honestly surprising because who the hell did he get it from? Neither Yami or Tsunade are that arrogant. At this point even a regular death on the battlefield wouldn't satisfy me this kid gotta die a humiliating death like falling off the stairs and breaking his neck😂😂😂

Why would his son be considered as a weakness? It seems to me that the mc is a lowliest of the low scum. Therefore if an enemy uses his son against him it would not work, therefore killing Yami because of so called 'weakness' is stupid. I mean even scum wouldn't consider killing their son for such nonsensical reason. I cant understand the mc thoughts. How can it be weakness at the first place when mc considers to kill him himself. Its kinda getting boring with mc being all alone and killing any potential comrades in my opinion. Its one thing to be evil and another being an edgy psychopath without feelings for anyone. Even joker has his harley.

bad chafter, i don't like it

A little annoying, since something about this child appeared

swear to god this little kid better die, if he doesn't then please just forget about him and not have him be a big part of the story lmao

I was expecting Yami to get close to someone and obtain a family whitout realising it, but I hoped it would be through romance.(not harem) Really not a fan of the kid. I don't mean the character cause he acts like 6 years old should and disliking it because of that is foolish, I mean the fact that he has a kid. Hope he goes away fast. Don't even have to kill him just send him to a parallel world if you don't want to make some people here angry. And I get it, not liking the idea that he kills his son. But still.....He gots t'go.

All I am saying is at this time both madara and black Zetsu are on look out for someone to perform to carry out their plans they may or may not know about Hachi yet since they didn't know about photo either since the beginning Oruchimaru is just looking fora leverage against Yami He doesn't want to be put in a situation were he has to choose between his goals or his son.... He is ****ed up to think about killing since the start I agree with that but he has the paranoia of being killed and views that Hachi could be a tool for his end in the future...

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good novel

Ty for the chapter!~

Bruh he should just slave seal or posses His body good body haha orochimaru 2

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Great chapter

Thanks for the Chapter !

Thxs for the chap

Era perfecto era ,ahora que lo quieres retratar como una persona normal el mc como todos los dioses Shinobi morirá 👍 porque si el destino no te lleva de la mano no eres necesario como Naruto Hokage,un mc Hokage dificulta eso así que el mundo necesitará matar al mc 😁 recomendar este fanfic es buenísimo asta el capítulo 110🏆🏆🏆🏆

I'm looking at deadman already~