release more

you should cut the fillers

Another one!!!

at least have 1500 words in a chapter. these feel too short.

hay! I caught up!!! some friendly suggestions to the Author: Please make your paragraphs longer. Paragraphs are so unnecessarily separated that it looks like a poem rather than a novel. And you should avoid writing sound effects... it's not for novels.. just friendly suggestions.

a very long rant. but agreed

John Doe? why is his name used for for the unidentified dead? is it just for reference?

I'm truly disappointed... I kinda wanted a full on rap battle between the two. But you could have any least written B's POV in rhymes, that would have made this a KILLER chapter to read.

a writer shouldn't have to go out of his way to justify his characters... specially not outside the story

that story did seem oddly familiar... I was wondering where it came from...

that was the worst dialogue with subtext I ever read... you don't need to say the meanings of the dialogue out loud. you should hint it a little and let the readers do the rest.

morgan wasn't a captain until three years before puffy set sail...

info dump....