Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)

Dude good luck with the girl, I am rooting for ya. But I do have to remind you when you are doing it for the first time use protection wouldn't want any unexpected misha** now, would we?

Asks girl out Relationship is going well Tells her about novel She reads it Is disgusted Breaks up

Oh yeah by the way I wrote a chapter yesterday but I wasn't satisfied with it so I deleted it. So instead of writing how the MC did his plan I thought... hey lets write it this way, lets see how bad killing is, in other stories I haven't seen an enemy where he is 'alive' and the MC kills them without even blinking and we don't think about them. We forget that he had a family or a life someone that will miss them we treat them like ants. So I just wrote this to explain that everyone has a story, and the enemy is not evil after all in war everyone isn't an evil bastard and that killing isn't a simple action, to me killing it is the most evil a peson can commit. Oh yeah I am now one of the *cough* scummy *cough* authors that has a patrion I will write some advanced chapters from all my stories and put them in there in the future. Some of them will be: DxD Crawling to the top Hunter x Hunter a Selfish wish Dream to immortality..... etc...

thx

Author are you terrorist master mind? You really like to use suicide bomber with remote control.

Will you ever make there be a big challenge for Yami like there is also another reincarnation who also wants immortality and is yamis biggest nemesis or friend with a betrayal. Or at least something to make Yami loose to cause he’s just getting things done easily

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Thanks for the chapter

Why is ken’s backstory the same as akaza from demon slayer backstory?

Well that was a... funny? Yes funny filler

nice.

she hot?

Mc is still a real scumbag

its been a few months since. did ya get the girl or nah?

Thanks for the

Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️

Thanks for the chapter~

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did u use the story from kimetsu no yaiba? that demon that use martial arts

Thanks for the chapter !