Jmwells2003
I liked Anna from her first appearance, she showed to be very intelligent and cunning for a six year old girl, for me it is very logical that she has an advantage in an argument. As far as mental age goes, it makes sense to me, she shows an adequate amount of maturity for her age, but I think she could do better. Thank you for the chapter.
If there is one thing I absolutely hate the most in novels with a bit of romance, it's dense characters. Character development is important and your choice is the most easiest way to develop romance. But that's the point. Its easy, it's lazy and it's the most boring way. That smack talk and competition might be funny at first, but if it's going about and about you'll see me skip a lot of your story. And I highly doubt your story is about romance. Your main genre are fantasy and adventure. Keep it at it. Keep romance short, focus on Alex. If you do that, your story will stay as great as it is. You are doing a good job. Don't mix up your focus points.
Sei que não vai ter harém e por isso essa interação é um pouco irritante já que parece um MC denso de anime harém japonês ou seja que só conseguia deixar suportável porque você sabe que vai ser harém no final então não pode tem um vencedor cedo mais como o autor não parece ter um estilo de apoiar harém essa situação me parece clichê irritante