webnovel
avatar

Comments of chapter undefined of Prime Originator

Syn_1994
Syn_1994Lv1Syn_1994

this has been trash so far tbh

Chunchunmaru_sama
Chunchunmaru_samaLv6Chunchunmaru_sama

I'm probably nitpicking but he was covered in impurity after the guard chased him out. After leaving school while covered in impurity that smells 10x worse than sh*t the thing that crossed his mind was to eat chicken while smelling like sh*t?.... Somehow if the author forgot it then I guess I set my expectations too high for this. Still gonna read it, if its worth it.

EverlastingBoner
EverlastingBonerLv4EverlastingBoner

Who the hell eats fried chicken while walking that's just asking to get choked to death.

insanitycrimson
insanitycrimsonLv5insanitycrimson

How did that teacher survive till 24 yrs !?😑

_Frost_
_Frost_Lv13_Frost_

fine with him saving the teacher but not fine with fact you set it up with some white knight passive making him do it. Be pretty trash if the mc has to save everyone he comes across or interfere in everyone's problems because of this

Bel1dm
Bel1dmLv2Bel1dm

Nice

chevaun
chevaunLv11chevaun

So far it’s lacking but has potential,hope the world building gets better or started in the following chapters

Author liked the comment.

SoberanoSinNombre
SoberanoSinNombreLv5SoberanoSinNombre

What does grandmist mean? The Spanish translator puts him as a grandmother or great fog if he is separated. Somebody give me a synonym please

Bel1dm
Bel1dmLv2Bel1dm

Nice

Tyler_Jess
Tyler_JessLv2Tyler_Jess

Nice

ManEr
ManErLv5ManEr

Dude, can anyone tell me what kind of world is this? I still cant find out bcz many isekai manga have kind of office like that, but herr i dont knoe if its modern time or not.

Author liked the comment.

El_Rasskull
El_RasskullLv4El_Rasskull

[img=recommend] Thanks for the chapter [img=recommend]

Author liked the comment.

wening
weningLv13wening

Ty

Yatendouij
YatendouijLv4Yatendouij

outro que pensa que Ă© um herĂłi mas na verdade Ă© um hipĂłcrita? pelo amor de deus se for mesmo assim mais a frente vou sair dessa porra

Author liked the comment.

fzsq82
fzsq82Lv15fzsq82

I love your novel already, gained a couple insights from smart you've written and I'm excited to see how all this continues.

Author liked the comment.

espral1974
espral1974Lv6espral1974

Tks for Chapt

Author liked the comment.

Passby
PassbyLv6Passby

More

Hardhard
HardhardLv1Hardhard

Lol unfortunately I'm dropping another novel from this site, and it's sad to see the mediocre ability of the authors, and I wonder why invent a "holy" technique out of nowhere for him to save his maiden

Ben_Goodrich
Ben_GoodrichLv13Ben_Goodrich

doesn't he still smell

Alagu2Muthu
Alagu2MuthuLv5Alagu2Muthu

xp