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Syn_19941yrCommentedpraying this foo doesnt waste my time
If he had milked the cow earlier, maybe he could've been the one who died rather than Jon.- Syn_19941yrCommentedCh 3 Initial Success in The Technique
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how cliche, ive seen this plot at least twice already
'Since I don't have any cultivation, I should at least give it a try. It wouldn't be too late to practice the [Divine Fiery God Manual] if it doesn't work out.' - Syn_19941yrCommented
i dont really recommend doing a pov for javier as im assuming ur english is not the best so its hard to do it well, just stick with one way, either third person or first person.
Javier POV - Syn_19941yrCommentedCh 56 Chapter 55- Lord Abomination
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1) prolly bc of his multiple bloodlines in his blood or something 2) his dad prolly did something or got banished from gods realm 3) honestly no idea
Title- 1) Forbidden Existence. 2) Child of Atrocity. 3) Sign of Impurity. 4) The Last Survivor - Syn_19941yrCommented
wasnt he gay just a sec ago?
'She is so defenseless right now.' He thought and glanced at her chest. 'Her body is well developed, and after looking at her closely, I can see how beautiful she is. Her beauty indeed justifies her as a princess.' - Syn_19941yrCommentedCh 88 True Prodigy
- Syn_19941yrCommentedCh 88 True Prodigy
- Syn_19941yrCommentedCh 84 A Game of Blackjack
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adapting well? this guy is shocked by every little thing bruh
Thinking about it for a bit more, it was only then did Valyr realize that he had already been adapting to the situations thrown at him so far, doing incredibly well at adapting to the point he had become a legend in Astarto Village. If that's the case, then why the need to fear the unknown? - Syn_19941yrCommented
really dislike this abt the mc, not the first time im complaining abt it but ill do it anyway, his reactions r way too exaggerated, most mcs will be able to handle if something goes not according to script but this idiot always gets flustered
Not expecting to hear such words to come from Jekyll at all, Valyr's mind went blank for a moment, only to snap back in reality a few seconds later as he looked at the man in front of him in disbelief. As he looked at him, he could not help but think about what he had done to garner such attention from Jekyll, which only ensued more confusion to arise in his mind. - Syn_19941yrCommentedCh 81 A Twist of Events
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exactly bruh, this mc has been below expectations so far tbh
Eventually, the panic ate away at his composure so much that he needed Jekyll to attract his attention to snap him back to reality. "Hello? Am I talking to a rock or something?" - Syn_19941yrCommentedCh 76 Making Preparations
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well its fine since hes sticking with it, i wld have just shown ability to make a proper dagger but not too much, since hes gonna leave the village soon anyways
By the time the three attempts had been finished, Valyr stood up from the seat and left the smithy after bidding farewell to Tristan. Due to the fact that he wanted it to seem that he became more and more skilled with forging the more attempts he got, the quality of his work increased with every attempt, though he made it seem like his second attempt felt like the attempt that was going to successfully create a dagger. Unfortunately, even with Tristan intently looking at his work with incredulity, he failed that attempt at the very last moment, causing his three attempts at forging daggers to become nothing more than subpar blades. - Syn_19941yrReplied to nvanattia
exactly, and his vitality is way higher now
While doing the stretches, Valyr was surprised to find out that other than a bit of soreness in some areas, his body felt limber. Recalling what he had done during his first day in the village, which rendered him incapable of moving if not for the pain relief pills he bought, he could not help but be astonished. After all, the magnitude of things he had done yesterday during the monster tide was tens, if not hundreds of times more strenuous than what he did back then. - Syn_19941yrCommented
i mean.. its a way to add more words for sure but heres feedback, theres no need to add 'at this point.... piqued' u can just put the dialogue part only since anything else is irrelevant.
"And that would be…?" At this point, Valyr's curiosity was piqued.