Comments of chapter undefined of Oh My, I Messed Up the Story

I feel like this car thing is a reference to something... Maybe a recent car accident? Hmmm? Mallory-san?

I can relate to her life... I wish I didn't though... what is the hardest is when people start whispering about you behind your back within your hearing...

The way you give a detailed explanation on the accident made me wonder if you had experienced one. Great start Mcllorycat!!

I have to ask, but that cartoon you were referring to, was it The Magical School Bus?

this is a great start, good job

just started this book after finishing another one and in already enjoying it! the brakes is no joke! I was very lucky I didn't get into an accident when my Master brake cylinoid failed.

I likedfl sense of humor

I'm curious as to what her disease is. Will she ever find out?

I'll read more of this later, I need to write more chapters for my newly published book as well. Get back later, author.

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Moral of the Story: That's why cars should be regularly maintained.

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