LivingInShameless
Go back and edit his height in for at least 6’2 with potential to grow and why pale why not similar to some celeb as a description for looks like say the ones that play Thor or captain America or or better yet aquaman and Batman I’m too lazy to put real names but by saying your changed your looks similar to theirs we get a much better description of what they look like and why they would be lady killers he’ll pick Channing Tatum women love him you basically described him only a weird pale skin no one wants that screams I’m a vampire no one looks like that in those worlds. I’m interested in the book but at least flesh out the character description