Comments of chapter undefined of Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?
Reili
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We all seem to hate the idea of nan tian getting with Shiro and Lyrica being the only one, which really goes to show that Reili cant seem to write romance well and that shiros main party were really just a plot device not people we should actually care about Like come on it has been hundreds of chapters at this point where we’ve had a good chapter with the party and all their relegated to now is “OMG your powers even more ridiculous then last time, what a surprise” this gag is old and stale and shows that Reili is out ideas for the party considering he refuses to leave Shiro’s perspective for even a moment despite not being a first person account. I really wish he started being more creative because this book is just becoming a power trip with no real suspense or heart break, 1. Shiro is always injured when no problems arise 2. no one takes any kind of permanent injury despite there being curses. 3. where’s the Black Monarchy sub plot that was started in the first hundred or so chapters that one really disappointing Beast Monarch side plot wasnt interesting and was rather lame. 4. how about taking the time to chill and bit and do something different, its getting exhausting reading as shiro moves from large action set-piece to large action set-piece with small training montage of new powers in-between. im getting burnt out reading it constantly TL;DR I just wish for Reili to something different for a change as to me this has turned into a typical Xuanxia book.
Honestly, despite me saying to give the guy (I mean Nan Tian here) a chance, it's feeling rather forced at this point. . . . *sigh* I feel very disappointed at the romance in this story. I thought it would be more smooth instead of just in your face, and I'd hoped that they could develop more of their characters and personalities through better interaction and communication. But with all the other MORE interesting things going on with the story there is no room for this or maybe our dear author is just not cut out for writing romance and integrating it in a story... I get that it's not the priority of this story, that's why adding romance-plotline moments after a hyper tension scene, without a smooth enough transition, just doesn't appeal to me as a reader... Writing or imbuing romance just doesn't seem to be our Author-Sama's strong suit... 🤷🏻♀️ Maybe you can try to your hand at the romance genre in another book Reili... 🤔 If you can't do it, then don't force it Author-Sama, even if it's for us readers... I feel that when you have a story with a different plot-focus altogether, then it's better to continue to write in that same genre than adding in some half-baked romance, which might also not give you that much of a satisfaction... This is all my own perspective and not meant to be degrading in anyway, so just don't get too harsh with your own opinions, when you read and respond to this comment, fellow readers... 😅 And I hope that you see this or atleast keep my comment in mind Author-Sama, it's just a suggestion and constructive criticism... it's to help you and not meant to be offensive in anyway... 😬 Thanks you for your time to read my little rant...😅🤗 Also thank you for the chapter~😊 Loved the whole interaction with Isilia and all those Nimue and Attie moments 😄
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Knew tha Shiro and Lyrica won't be a think it just didn't click enough to work plus while Lyrica's obsesive love is a funny gag it just doesn't work for an actual reletionship. I also doubt that Shiro will end up with Nan Tian as while he may have the chieldhood friend card and is a preatty great guy their reletionships is nothing more then "he flirts and teases her and she reacts strongly" and thats about it Shiro doesn't feel anything to strong about him then "best male friend". I have a theory to who's Shiro future husbando/waifu but that will have to wait untill i get more evidence
