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I'm just throwing this out there, but parts of this chapter were a bit confusing. Natashia and Agnes have already performed the marriage ritual with Victor. So what's the ritual you're talking about here? Seems like it has a bloodline change involved like with Kaguya? Is there a different ritual to officially join Clan Alucard? Wish you spelled it out a bit more clearly. Additionally, just a general observation, but a lot of times it seems like you're making Victor look good by making other characters seem incompetent. Vlad is a good example of this. Leon also seems to be suffering the same treatment. Most recently in this chapter, Agnes or some other Snow Clan member never thought to make her fire hotter? Really? That is basic level stuff. It's like saying someone with ice never thought to make it colder or someone with lightning never thought to go fast. It feels to make Victor seem more impressive you're dragging down other characters, when you could make everyone competent and Victor even better instead, which provides a more enjoyable reading experience and improves the novel quality overall. The best comparison I have for this situation is like Victor is a cliché teenage girl that surrounds herself with fat and ugly friends to look better.
Honestly its more of a guilty pleasure novel at this point. The author doesn't do a great job developing side characters at all so the MC never establishes any meaningful level of relationship with the other characters in the novel. It's pretty much a stage only for him. Despite achieving "impossible" results and "producing miracles" countless times, the world never seems to really appreciate what the MC's guild is capable of, which creates a repetitive story dynamic where a problem arises, it's perceived / sold as a crisis, the MC pulls a problem solving rabbit out of a hat and it's solved via miracle magic.
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