Comments of chapter undefined of The Fastest Man Alive - Marvel

I seems our mc does not give a **** about his girlfreind like at all.

Sigh I say it in all fan fics I have read but, it isn't a good idea to let profesor x know what you can do, cause he does what batman does and plana how to kill you, so it isn't a good idea man

His fanboyism is starting to be annoying. Also, where is his self-righteousness coming from? He didn't have to endure anything but acts like he is entitled to. Also, a few moments ago he was acting as if Gwen is his life now he acts like a jerk. Has he already forgotten about her after seeing Mystique? Everything I liked about the character went to the drain in a single chapter.

Damn, mc is saying all his secrets like its f*cking nothing. This is quite retarded, considering that he tells every single person he meets that he has the 'key to access some primordial power' bullsh*t. God f*cking damn it.

Do you proof read before you post? Or do you just vomit all over the page and then post? This is a great story, but it's annoying to read purely because your sentence structure has no flow. You can do better then this man, good luck fam.

Jesus this is beyond cringe. This is so hard to read. I've already dropped the fic thrice on this chapter.

more like a fãnboy then a speedster hero

It's so hard to read and understand MC's thoughts that I thin to drop it. The first part of this chapter was about nothing, at the middle I tried to understand what the revolution fu*/=k about definition metahuman and at the end of the chapter I still didn't realise MC's intentions, thoughts, preferences and how old his mindstate is. Anyway, give a try to next chapter, let's hope there will be Stacy

his superpower are = bla bla bla no jutsu

is this a harem? because if it isn't i can't say i like the mc this chapter. he has a girlfriend and he's practically eye humping two other women. like i get hormones and what not but he needs to reel it in a bit.

I didn’t know that we men, as a teenager, behave like an animal, the author is probably a crazy fool if he describes people like that, I am absolutely sure that if we even stare at someone we do not behave like a vegetable and do not drool it is really offensive to read in such like, I'm 20, I perfectly understand the topic of harmonies with us, but no one ever being an adequate person will behave like gg, I can endlessly stare but not behave like an idiot yes I can be ashamed as much as I want but drooling and behaving like a vegetable is already too much

Wasn't Raven introduced when she walked in with Eric? Why is she surprised that he knows her name? His mother loudly announced their names.

bro who in san conscience reveals that he has access to a cosmic force this is very stupid

he's pathetic. i hate people who only become a hero/anti-hero to become famous. if u want to be famous become an actor or something. the only reason to become a hero is to either protect their family or to protect everyone else.

Loved it. I also think the flash should be able to use the speed force to age things instantly lol. Like a giant robot rampages through the city then the flash runs the speed force through it and poof suddenly a ton of metallic dust falls from the sky as the robot is now aged for millions of years in a instant.

Yeah, no.

DUDE! Author stop going on tangents! It gets boring real fast explaining every detail in every which way you can.

Well this chapter was a let down :/ dont think this story is for me with an MC like this

Mc is a simp