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maybe like the MC of Everyone Else is a Returnee?
All Mights Teacher was Nana Shimura. Shigaraki is All for Ones last name.
you don't need apostrophes (' ') for these sections, it just makes it annoying to read. Sorry, I like the story but it's driving me crazy
you just described Asmongold
Trainwrecks, look what you've done...
when did I complain? I just listed his ability?
Lightning Blade is an enhanced form of Chidori. And it's not smart to use unless you have sharingan level enhanced perception. You'd get tunnel vision, and would move too fast for your body or eyes to react, and you can only run in a straight line... A well placed kunai is game over
As of Chapter 55 The most disappointing Akikan fiction yet. It's disturbing how he talks about the mc as a kid. Downright creepy. Talking about a 4-5 year olds **** for multiple paragraphs is just too much. Even if you look past that, this story is a bore. Akikan has this story by a leash, and is dragging the poor thing against it's will. The story doesn't flow and it feels forced. At no point have I felt any excitement while reading, it just drones on. I'm just waiting for him to inevitably drop it and move on to a new idea.
Jaden Smith? what are you doing here?
You guys have so much experience with killing people. Amazing. Thanks for teaching how true men handle their killings. Great. Absolutely brilliant.