Take_the_Moon
That last sentence man 😂😂😂 ♡(*>ω<)ω<*♡ Here a short poem I made up to celebrate their great karma. Short Poem by yours truly: you look yet I hide in the end there's a nice surprise neither of us knowing What fate had in stored we met again only not to know only our feelings will bring us closer to the answer. 💜❤💜❤
I really enjoy the story so far and I appreciate that you explain how this world works, but the explanations aren't seamlessly woven into the story. They make up such a portion of the chapter that I felt I was reading a manual at one point. Not sure how you could fix that, but it took from my reading experience so I decided to mention it in case you do edits later on.