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DaoistiLfVKD

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  • DaoistiLfVKD
    DaoistiLfVKD1yr
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    I see all the sweetness 😍 My thoughts is that if Song Yan parents were this powerful, their death must have had a lot of complications

    Ch 39 Zhong Liang's erased past (Part 1)
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  • DaoistiLfVKD
    DaoistiLfVKD1yr
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    The funny thing is, he's looking but never say a word, what's the point? 🤣🤣🤣🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂

    Ch 36 Elder Han's problems only increase (Part 1)
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  • DaoistiLfVKD
    DaoistiLfVKD1yr
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    I love the story overall and appreciate the great writeup. However, I'm a little conscious about the ages. Like having 12year old kids talking about love and crush even in a childish way. It gives me a lil creep

    Ch 35 First Loves Are Confused (Part 2)
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  • DaoistiLfVKD
    DaoistiLfVKD1yr
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    These little group of rascals trying to annoy their senior. Yi is so jealous and protective of his friend 🤣😂😂

    Ch 24 An arrival in the big border city! (Part 1)
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  • DaoistiLfVKD
    DaoistiLfVKD1yr
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    Instead of telling us his birth place, it would have been nice to tell us sometimes in the future after the MC and ML takes a trip to said location. Maybe a flashback.

    Ch 21 Zhong Liang
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  • DaoistiLfVKD
    DaoistiLfVKD1yr
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    Hello, I really enjoy reading this story. I am currently pursuing my Master's degree in Canada and English is my official language. I also enjoy writing romance novels and have a fairly good understanding of how to write and edit. Therefore, I am happy to proofread or edit your work for free. It's a fantastic story that could be improved with a few edits.

    Ch 20 Who wants to capture the god of war?
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  • DaoistiLfVKD
    DaoistiLfVKD1yr
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    That brief moment of attraction between the Male leads❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

    Ch 17 God of War
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  • DaoistiLfVKD
    DaoistiLfVKD1yr
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    The building that can fly? Love it

    Ch 16 An interesting trip
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  • DaoistiLfVKD
    DaoistiLfVKD1yr
    Replied to Take_the_Moon

    I have similar questions

    Ch 13 Causing waves in the Celestial Sword sect
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  • DaoistiLfVKD
    DaoistiLfVKD1yr
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    This took a surprising turn

    Ch 11 Master Han Yie
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  • DaoistiLfVKD
    DaoistiLfVKD1yr
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    I also like the relationship between the two boys. They're too young to fan for themselves and I hope Yi never bretray Yan

    Ch 8 Last day before the big test
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  • DaoistiLfVKD
    DaoistiLfVKD1yr
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    I'm so sad that he give away the wolf. I thought he would raise it to be his partner, how frustrating 😤

    Ch 6 Adopting a wolf cub and the secret of the wolves of the winds
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  • DaoistiLfVKD
    DaoistiLfVKD1yr
    Commented

    I hope this book gets adapted into an series. How can we support that to happen? I love it and it's so different and bring a fresh new perspective to readers

    Ch 4 The injured cultivator
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  • DaoistiLfVKD
    DaoistiLfVKD1yr
    Commented

    I already love San Yan..Nice write-up

    Ch 3 A Guy with all Abilities, but Expert in None!
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  • DaoistiLfVKD
    DaoistiLfVKD1yr
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    This chapter and Yan blow my mind. I LOVE IT. He's far too mature for his age and the mystery is exciting

    Ch 2 Pretending to be a Pig until they become a Tiger
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  • DaoistiLfVKD
    DaoistiLfVKD1yr
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    The chapter is quite engaging but too many information especially on the division of sects and realms. Not easy to follow.

    Ch 1 The Coming of the Sects and the Tragedy of Song Family
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