Comments of chapter undefined of Supreme Magus

Nice start! I have this novel is in my library for a long time and I not yet start reading this story but now this time i would give it a try! Appreciate your hard work author👍🏻

Savage

Intense, but I am interested

I think I found a new favorite to read.

Honestly....not a great start. I felt like the whole thing was kinda unrealistic. Starting with "cruising for a bruising"

there's quite alot of contradictions which statements being made inside of a prologue especially regarding his personality and talents. I wouldn't have much of a problem with it if it showed up like a few chapters later but the contradictions are literally State one fact but with the next sentence he completely debunks that point of fact that he just made. For example he says that the character does not have good hand-eye coordination. But he can somehow grasp the time he needed to hit people on a clutch. that is something that requires good hand-eye coordination not just some average hand-eye coordination. Even more so to pick up so-called killer moves from any martial arts because martial arts requires dedication and practice as well as some Talent and moving your body which contradicts the fact that he said he's not Nimble which can mean a multiple things such as not being light on his feet, not being so flexible, not being so dexterous, and not being so agile, and with the exception of being agile those are all things that are particularly needed for jiu jitsu

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SAVAGE!!!! BUT I LIKE IT.

Nice

Nothing.

err, Should I care? Like this feels unrealistic :I

Smart kid, though some of the dialogue seemed a bit unrealistic for middle school aged boys.

Seems okay so far well it is only the first prologue after all, can't wait to see why so many ppl love this

Well lezzgoo

Exp.

Thank you for the chapter 🔅

author is definitely venting

just started to read..

good good good, now that's how you end bullying