Kotario
Why, I stayed up three days in a row to binge read this story, and finally at the end I find out that it's going on hiatus. God, why do you toy with me so?
Devils_Advocate:Well, God seems to have answered your prayers in the next chapter XD Or perhaps it was this Devil 3:D
What you did in chapter 30 is a really bold move that shows a depth to characters that I havent seen in a long time. Rape is a really grownup topic. People carry guilt for their entire lives if they feel physically pleasured by it. Although I never got to read the original chapter, the point of it was for us to hate Local Lord. the point of it was to get us to understand what kind of trauma Drako and Eva went through. Love is strong. Draco went through an experience that would fundamentally change anyone. the character development from that point to now truely makes this story great. Sure you dont get "as much" hype or attention on this novel, but so what? Draco still wants his mechs I want to see him continue to grow in power until he and Eva fight whatever force sent away the original gods. I want to see him potentially meet Lucifer in the future. I know that seeing not as many people enjoy your novel can lead to being disappointed, but I really LOVE this novel. it is my favorite read. I take a bathroom break every toime I see a chapter come out. Please dont put us on Hiatus. I know you want to start a new novel, but please consider continuing to update this story maybe even once a week? There is SO MUCH this story has left in it. You have created a UNIVERSE that Houndreds have enjoyed. Please don't drop it... Please...
Unfortunately, the text would be barely readable on WN's comment sections, so I created a GDoc page explaining the reason for our decision. Please give this a like so that other people can see it too. Future of Guild Wars; https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zXqQ7zX7eq4p9iQcHP8FrQHVCcOEWKPPOQgn6OOp4Yk/edit
nooo! as first, I like a lot of people, didnt like chapter 30, but over time Eve begins to grow on you. people end up liking her. the only 2 points of criticism I have are Drakos la l or attention and care for his other wives as well as the fact that the game is just code as opposed to an alt reality like in shuras wrath. othersie, this story is awesome.