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They said the youngest ever had been 25, but that could have been 15 years ago
I’v read 75 chapters and the first 50 were somewhat interesting, it feels like the author stopped telling us the actual development and just started making up numbers on the fly. New units from nowhere. Number scalling that doesn’t make sense. Underdeveloped face slap moments that feel empty. A weird romance element with a succubus that looks 14… overall, if you’r looking for a kingdom building experience, it will not be found here.
he's a baby. there is no measurable strength in a baby. if 10 is accepted as (Healthy adult) then 1/10th would be at LEAST 10lbs.
Everything he’s doing feels a bit rushed.
The Bible says many things, one is that God “loves” arrogance lmao
Unfortunately, the word of god as gotten a bit too watered down and most Christians wont be able to answer most of these questions. I pray that someday you will want to learn more about the things you’v made assumptionse about. Until then if you ever want to start reading the Bible, start in the New Testament and skip Numbers in the old.
No way would she have said that!
I don't think they are restricted to one a day, I believe the author is making the point that they probably send more than 1 and even 1 would be a TON
I'm starting to think that the dragons are going to be the evil ones...
he spent the whole night doing stuff, so resting for a day when injured is fine
See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop
I think you could plan out what climax you want to build to, then write out a story map. say you want the next MAJOR climax to be in 1 year, plan out all the steps that your character will have to take to get there. have them fight for their items and continue the crafting element. gear is meaningless unless it is a struggle to get made. I care about a sword that a character had to go fight a battle to find the materials for way more than a sword bought with generic points. Then if an enemy can break or destroy a sword it can also serve to give a good basis for how strong they are. if the MC almost dies to a beast, takes the strongest part and builds his weapons/Armour and then a big bad can easily break that gear it's implied that the big bad could easily kill the beast too...
I disagree. he was recently released from prison when you have to distrust everyone, then was constantly being hunted for 3 STRAIGHT MONTHS with no REAL interaction or conversations other than with a God who through him into an even more dangerous situation and held his only friend like companion hostage. He shouldn't trust anyone until he is given a reason.
unjustified? not really. nobody likes to be toyed with, and that is essentially what sloth at least was doing in the beginning. The gods seem a little bit like immature bullies at this point with no real plan. Maybe now that the Gods' personalities aren't split they should be more mature going forward? This may alow Aito a good excuse to realize and appreciate the 2nd chance that he's been given. He will be a more valuable pawn to the God's than the others chosen because he has passed a harder test than the others.. Having a more genuine connection with the God's can be justified like how a king and his generals get along like brothers. like how the most valued employee gets to sometimes argue with the boss, as long as he doesn't cross an understood "line"
at least not at first if I'm following what you're saying at least. possible world border disintegration and all 3(or four) could have similar dreams of them fighting together in the epic battleground at the end? jack can deeply feel a connection to all three of the others, but especially her... run with it if you want.
this was my favorite monster from that show!
what if you alternated 6 days a week and took a day off. say Mon. Wed. Fri. you put out Guild Wars, Tue. Thrs. Sat. Darius Supreme. that way it's a regular schedule. then do a mass release in either one if you're able to stock up extra chapters. Regular release schedule makes people happy cause they can look forward to it. the book that gets more PS gets the extra posted on Sundays.
lmk when you write it and I'll give it a shot