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Comments of chapter undefined of Riser Phenex isn't a villain

jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

What a disgusting ending, I even expected him to kill the will of the world, but you put this thing, where he only mentions others, but only dedicates a paragraph to the mc, of all the endings, this takes the prize for the worst way to end (it was not even compensate for the chapters of suffering that the readers went through for the non-death of issei), total disappointment....

Weirdo
WeirdoLv6Weirdo

Even Akikan feel embarrassed by his own fanatic....

KontoelBiru:if u not like it, why not make ur own Fan Fic dude ? 😅
Ren_Ao
Ren_AoLv3Ren_Ao

Not really a good ending like yours before. But I can say that this fic is most different any others of yours, and make a new probability that you will bring in new fic. It's not really a long journey but, still one of the best dxd fanfic out there. Good job akikan for completing this fic

AenarionVoldigoad
AenarionVoldigoadLv5AenarionVoldigoad

This was a disappointing and disgusting ending what a waste of my time

LoLiSoN
LoLiSoNLv1LoLiSoN

I understand how you wrote the ending like this. But to be honest, I'm quite disappointed and feel betrayed, especially by the MC. He's been through a lot. From the beginning from episode 1 to episode 409, everything was finally reset. It turns out those things never happened. And Issei in the previous world was the reason Ophis had to die. But in the new world, Issei has become a young man who is perfect for everything no matter what anyone says. I felt like everything I had read was meaningless. Because it is said that what I read has never happened before.

Peekaboo_01
Peekaboo_01Lv2Peekaboo_01

author, it was a good ending don't listen to others they just complain about every novels out there

Am_Vein_Enta
Am_Vein_EntaLv1Am_Vein_Enta

Thanks for everything akikan! see you next time, in another masterpiece!

MarinXGrayfia
MarinXGrayfiaLv4MarinXGrayfia

truly disgusting pathetic. I thought we see his children in new galaxy but nah.

AscendedPug
AscendedPugLv11AscendedPug

My disappointment is immeasurable and my day is ruined

Asura_Vajra
Asura_VajraLv5Asura_Vajra

...so in the end, the solution was JoJo... Umu, that makes sense.

LoLiSoN
LoLiSoNLv1LoLiSoN

Most of akikan's works come back and re-read every story but this one. It will be the first story that I'll delete it and never come back and read it again.

Demon_Bat
Demon_BatLv1Demon_Bat

In the end he gave up fighting the will of the world that's pretty pathetic,I know he technically beat it by going to a new universe but it's not the same,not that good of a ending tbh

Oniisama
OniisamaLv4Oniisama

I think you deserve to rest for awhile. Avoid writing and try to read some other novels, fanfic to improve yours.

uzahari
uzahariLv4uzahari

well u are a bit rushed the ending and u do like in that tsukasa +mineta. riser have despreto and never used it to change fate and ending like mineta world. At least u end 😔😔😔 the novel.sigh.i don't think I can reread this one since the ending is too rush and no more sub story afterall.At least u should make riser harem members name mentions one more and how they all meet. like after story or after end

GenYase
GenYaseLv5GenYase

Good thing I'm reading it in the morning, maybe the disappointment will disappear by the end of the day

Luthion
LuthionLv2Luthion

Siendo honesto, estoy decepcionado con los Ășltimos capĂ­tulos y su final, muchas habilidades Ăștiles sin ser usadas y sin dar la pelea que un verdadero desperado tendrĂ­a que dar. Pero, al final de todo, gracias, gracias por continuar con la novela y darle un final, a diferencia de otros que lo dejan a mitad de camino o, incluso al inicio, lograste avanzar y terminarlo. Fue una novela interesante al inicio e innovadora a la mitad, con un final decepcionante. No puedo decir que amo este fanfic o que sea mi favorito, pero, si he disfrutado pasar mi tiempo leyendo cada capitulo. De nuevo, gracias por terminarlo y darle un final. SeguirĂ© leyendo tus fanfic y dando todo el apoyo que pueda, nuevamente, gracias y nos vemos en una nueva historia que puedas crear mĂĄs adelante.

StormBreaker
StormBreakerLv2StormBreaker

this ending was very bad (translate)

Dbz
DbzLv4Dbz

Author make a new novel on THAT TIME I GOT REINCARNATED AS SLIME !

xdestruct0x
xdestruct0xLv4xdestruct0x

great Akikan story from beginning to end breaking the canon, it's just a suggestion but you could create a story with Snape as the protagonist, in the era of the marauders where he will also break the canon.

Anonny_Anonymous
Anonny_AnonymousLv1Anonny_Anonymous

One of the worst endings I’ve ever read in a fic.

jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

Esperaba una buena salida, pero diste solo relleno y un pĂĄrrafo al mc .