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Comments of chapter undefined of Pokemon - A Mystical Journey

Tim_
Tim_Lv11Tim_

I feel like you forgot earlier parts of the story. He is already awake to realities of this world with the whole getting grandfather and his grandfather's pokemon disabled backstory. From that event he was already of the mindset to get strong. I don't understand why he's having a larger breakdown over people he's not actually related to. Did you forget how dark you made the MC's initial training plan? Gastly was devouring poison cores and crippling pokemon. Charmander was hunting and eating dead Ekans and stuff. He then sold pokemon on the black market and then used funds to buy pokemon that he killed and fed to Gastly. Alex has personally killed others. I think some of the shadow gang guys but for sure he killed the poachers in green village. You made this cool dark MC, a guy mentally older than 11, but now you are making him act his age. The event you are using to direct this growth is less impactful than events experienced in the past, which makes this feel super fake.

stads
stadsLv12stads

nice chapter thx for writing it wonder how alex will escape his mother's newly build dungeon to keep him save

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DaoOfWebNovel
DaoOfWebNovelLv5DaoOfWebNovel

Ahh i was hoping Mew came at the meeting and reminded Oak his place!!

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Bignner
BignnerLv4Bignner

Thanks for the chapter

Piezy
PiezyLv5Piezy

Thanks for the chapter

Supreme_Turtle
Supreme_TurtleLv14Supreme_Turtle

Thanks for the chap

Anwe
AnweLv7Anwe

Thanks for the Chapter

Lazyasian
LazyasianLv13Lazyasian

Need more

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Insert_NameLv14Insert_Name

Thanks for the chapter

Beruit
BeruitLv13Beruit

Love the story. Thanks