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I like reading. 📚 I read fast. 💨 This is the place I read, so that I don't run out of content and money 💰💸 I like my comments, I hope you do too. 👍 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 5.0 (4815 ratings)

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  • Tim_
    Tim_3mth
    Posted

    He's super arrogant, but tbh that's kind of expected, but where this really loses me is when his sword is like a magic girl. Like wtf I can get integration power wise but this is a little too out of context for that universe. Not for me. Not really recommended. Translation is okay but has some weird edited spots.

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    I, Naruto's Uncle, Am Really Invincible
    Anime & Comics · Nobody2NoBody
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  • Tim_
    Tim_4mth
    Posted

    This reminds me a lot of the protagonist from losing money to be a tycoon. He doesn't really want to go the training route because of danger, but the world setting has everyone else being kind of dumb, so he ends up bumbling his way to the elite. His pokemon's personalities are where this is a real winner. His starter is just so self motivated and a pleasure to read. The translation quality is like 500% better than MTL, like pokemon is one of those things where it doesn't MTL well because the names end up as "ghost rock", etc. So I'm happy to see it getting a solid translation. I'd rate this as one of the better translations I've read. Looking forward to more!

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    I Really Don't Want To Be A Trainer
    Anime & Comics · ShazeSensei
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  • Tim_
    Tim_4mth
    Commented

    Haunter really is the star of this show. Like the parts with him are the most interesting.

    Ch 133 Chapter 134
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    I Really Don't Want To Be A Trainer
    Anime & Comics · ShazeSensei
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  • Tim_
    Tim_5mth
    Posted

    Seriously hard to get into. God let him pick way to many OP perks. The guy knows everything before he's born, like seriously he should have spent the last wish to skip 6 years so he doesn't have to be a baby. He's super OP, knows everything, but he is dumb as a rock. He knows everything, has super bullshit build, AI helper, etc. Like dude don't save a wish for if somehow you are going to be on the back foot, use it to skip time in womb.

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    The Might Of A True Uchiha {Completed}
    Anime & Comics · SomeSpookyGuy
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  • Tim_
    Tim_5mth
    Posted

    I wish there was more of an epilogue. Honestly it was a warm read, like no one you care about dies. Seriously though a timeskip to 10 years later would be great.

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    Creating The Manga Of Naruto On Naruto World Become My Ultimate Goal!
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  • Tim_
    Tim_5mth
    Commented

    Who would hate this. His story was so sad in original, anyone who can do something about it and chooses not to is bad.

    Ch 22 You Are My Hero
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    Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson
    Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife
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  • Tim_
    Tim_5mth
    Posted

    The lack of planning really shows. Like the expansion is too fast and unrealistic, even with magic. He (a Northern) decided to f-off to essos and become a horse lord. It's just crazy.

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    Game Of Thrones: House Dustin
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  • Tim_
    Tim_1yr
    Commented

    seeing as last chapter ended in "end of novel" I'm assuming these are extras?

    Ch 1671 Interview
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    Losing Money to Be a Tycoon
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  • Tim_
    Tim_1yr
    Posted

    This was pretty solid until volume 4. At that point the author completely forgets everything about the MC and decides he needs to experience a traumatic event and have issues and personality changes in the aftermath. Which is fine, but the traumatic event itself is less impactful than four different situations earlier in the story. The entire thing feels super fake/forced. Writing around that area has huge issues with telling us stuff vs showing it. I swear I read lines like the following at least 10+ times. "He won't be the same after this", "This could change him forever", etc. The huge kicker is he starts acting all emotional when back at home. He showed zero personality changes earlier in the story (after kidnappings, murdering poachers, selling pokemon on black market, murdering pokemon to use as food for his current team). So why is he acting like a baby now?

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    Pokemon - A Mystical Journey
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  • Tim_
    Tim_1yr
    Commented

    I feel like you forgot earlier parts of the story. He is already awake to realities of this world with the whole getting grandfather and his grandfather's pokemon disabled backstory. From that event he was already of the mindset to get strong. I don't understand why he's having a larger breakdown over people he's not actually related to. Did you forget how dark you made the MC's initial training plan? Gastly was devouring poison cores and crippling pokemon. Charmander was hunting and eating dead Ekans and stuff. He then sold pokemon on the black market and then used funds to buy pokemon that he killed and fed to Gastly. Alex has personally killed others. I think some of the shadow gang guys but for sure he killed the poachers in green village. You made this cool dark MC, a guy mentally older than 11, but now you are making him act his age. The event you are using to direct this growth is less impactful than events experienced in the past, which makes this feel super fake.

    Ch 191 CHAPTER 2: Discussion and Alex's tears
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    Pokemon - A Mystical Journey
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  • Tim_
    Tim_1yr
    Commented

    #Mental anguish #Trauma This version of the MC who suddenly cares society is idiosyncratic with that guy I read about earlier. I thought he was cold. Like look at how he trained Gastly or the black market selling of pokemon. His cold blooded killing when escaping shadow. Seriously I remember him cold blood killing the green village poachers. I just don't understand why he's all traumatized now but not earlier? Smaller numbers make it more personal, so he should be more impacted by personally killing others than he is by his leadership leading to deaths. The hard numbers don't really help more than they hurt. Compared to the millions in town, 40k dead or injured is nothing. That's like less than 4% of one million. Pokemon deaths are even less of a deal, those are replaceable and from what we are told bonds only matter for advanced+ trainers. Plus like I mentioned earlier anyone who sells pokemon on black market shouldn't pretend to care about pokemon.

    Ch 189 CHAPTER 69
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    Pokemon - A Mystical Journey
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  • Tim_
    Tim_1yr
    Commented

    The second half of this volume just felt off. Like a perfect mix of cringe and filler that made me want to drop the story. I'd rather timeskip past any personality changes than have them shown like this (aka poorly). I felt like every other sentence was like "this is going to change him" or "he won't be the same person" and honestly that's fine to say once, but not once a chapter. Honestly this half of this arc made me wish the MC was older from the start. No one would be happy following lead of 10 year old, and any avenues to mitigate that feel absolutely cringe inducing.

    Ch 188 chapter 68
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    Pokemon - A Mystical Journey
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  • Tim_
    Tim_1yr
    Commented

    That was vision. Crushed into a ball. If I was in the room and saw that I'd probably mentally BSOD.

    Ch 140 chapter 22 : North Base
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    Pokemon - A Mystical Journey
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  • Tim_
    Tim_1yr
    Commented

    I'm just saying Steven is my pokemon idol. He's a champ, rich, and handsome.

    Ch 76 Fame across region (part 1)
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    Pokemon - A Mystical Journey
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  • Tim_
    Tim_1yr
    Commented

    I hope his grandpa gets healed up, but yeah that trip probably saved his grandsons life. Out MC needed a firm lesson to realize this world isn't a game.

    Ch 47 The Aftermath
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    Pokemon - A Mystical Journey
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  • Tim_
    Tim_1yr
    Commented

    I like how time travel is fair game. Looking forward to seeing it happen, lol.

    Ch 10 The Mysterious Identity of Alex
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    Pokemon - A Mystical Journey
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  • Tim_
    Tim_1yr
    Posted

    Sometimes authors give the MC some cheats and then try to keep power balanced and it's just not fun to read. I like how this story is has a MC who is just super OP and just rolls with it. Overall 3 for 3 on works by this author that I found interesting enough to read all the available chapters.

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    A spacewolf in westeros
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  • Tim_
    Tim_1yr
    Commented

    This was fun to read, can't wait for more.

    Ch 26 Dick move
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    Pokémon : A Rough Start In Kanto
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  • Tim_
    Tim_1yr
    Commented

    This is one of my favorites.

    Ch 84 Notice
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    Pokemon: lazy new life
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  • Tim_
    Tim_1yr
    Commented

    I love how shuckle has a favorite type of pokemon. That's something I can't recall seeing before.

    Ch 74 Glad I came today
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    Pokemon: lazy new life
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