akikan40
tbh I can see why this plot point is a good idea but at the same time I think the main reason its causing so much irritation for everyone is your compacting so much in such a short time frame each day is like 15 chapters or something so for us it's a long drawn out thing but for him it's only a few weeks you should have thrown in some time skips and less on the girls falling for him so fast I mean 6 months for us and not even a month for him you also make it seem like he's going to die or something if he moves on like he still can't love all the good memories have him read some philosophy or books on poly ect ect and have him come to a realization or something
Demasiado drama y eso de que lo haces para que atesore a las chicas es bul**** .... en vez de hacer una excusa para justificarte solo di que lo haces porque quieres y listo....sigh ... y estoy de acuerdo en que no se convierta en alguien que solo use a las mujeres ...pero eso de que se convierta en basura si no hay tanto drama es una tonteria ...como es ,depente de ti ...si lo quieres hacer basura o no.... podes evitar todo ese drama y aun asi hacerlo alguien que las valore y hasta ahora solo veo un tipo que usa a las mujeres para olvidar a su antigua novia ...osea es una basura, ademas de que es consiente de que como se comporta y su actitud hacia ciertas chicas hacen que estas tengan sentimientos por el pero que hace ? Nada le vale *** y las ignora...y no digas que no puede hacer nada porque es mentira
I, for one, actually appreciate this. You don’t see much depth in these kinds of stories, so yours is definitely a Breath of fresh air. I think it is vital to depict the women as peopls with lives and qualities and not just some random toy for readers. Keep going with your plan, everyone will get over it everually!