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Shuayeb_Ahmed5hReplied to Malphegori think you might as well just make it a village similar to iwa. after all that will give you more freedom to create your own OC's and your own legends within the village. you can also adjust the culture here and there to fit better
Before heading to the academy, he stopped by a bustling market stall, drawn in by the irresistible aroma of freshly baked treats. His eyes widened as he scanned the display of culinary creations.- Shuayeb_Ahmed7hCommented
sometimes greatness can be found in simplicity. instead of saying 'culinary creations' you could say 'food on display'. after all in that sentence you're expounding on the thoughts of your MC and i don't know about you but when I've seen a food stall the thought, culinary creations have never come to mind. when writing from your MC's point of view, you should think carefully on what kind of words he might say in his mind considering his age, background and personality. this is just my own humble opinion though. in the end you should stick with whatever you feel is right.
Before heading to the academy, he stopped by a bustling market stall, drawn in by the irresistible aroma of freshly baked treats. His eyes widened as he scanned the display of culinary creations. - Shuayeb_Ahmed1dCommented
he doesn't need this deal. this is him helping them. they can't force him to do anything. why should he commit to this? especially when it may anger mihawk.
"You're being a little unreasonable," He remarked, having no choice but to accept this deal which was not a problem in itself, the problem was how to break this up with his mother without getting beheaded in the process. - Shuayeb_Ahmed1dCommented
id still be leery about her though.... maybe it's just me
"From the bottom of my heart, I thank you for saving my daughters and opening my eyes…" - Shuayeb_Ahmed1dCommented
conquers haki effected the weather in the anime therefore theoretically it should be able to affect matter.
It wasn't exactly gravity, but the principle worked the same way as gravity did. Conqueror Haki on its own was unable to affect matter, but his Fourth Haki was different. He called it Psychokinesis, but that was too hard of a word for the citizen of this world to comprehend, hence, he left it as just '4th Will'. - Shuayeb_Ahmed1dReplied to TAKION'W-Why is she a female!? Could it be… the theory of parallel worlds? Not everything is bound to be exact. But it is a universe close enough to resemble one piece. There are different things and one of them is Mihawk's gender? if that's the case, how many things are different? is Shanks a woman too? Luffy? is this a matriarchal world?!'
- Shuayeb_Ahmed1dCommented
sakamoto kun dedu ga?
Tsubakihara Yuuji - Shuayeb_Ahmed2dCommented
how is sasuke as strong as Naruto with Naruto's insane training regimen? sasuke shouldn't be able to match Naruto's training regimen without Naruto's healing factor
Shaking his head as he stands up rubbing his stomach painfully, Naruto wiped the sweat from his forehead with his t-shirt and stared at Sasuke for a moment "I think it's time to move on to a new level of physical training." - Shuayeb_Ahmed2dReplied to C_K_3132
maybe like 50 years ago or so but in our generation I've not seen or heard of it. though that may just be my circles.
However, marriages between cousins were unheard of even in ancient times. Could the Li family have some strange concept of pure blood and impure blood? - Shuayeb_Ahmed2dReplied to Rogue_Gamer
yh it's like feeling guilty towards all the men in the world coz in another world your wife could've been with them
And because he had inadvertently become a rival in love, perhaps even stealing Anakin's girl, Peter resolved to help Anakin if and when they ever met.'Maybe I should save his mother? Or possibly set them both free early?" - Shuayeb_Ahmed3dCommented
in return? what did he ask for in the first place?
Theo: "What do you seek in return?" - Shuayeb_Ahmed3dCommented
you know i don't like this whole guilt over what could've happened. i mean the movies are just one potential possibility out of infinite possibilities. there's no point in being guilty over something that might or might not happen in the future like this.
And because he had inadvertently become a rival in love, perhaps even stealing Anakin's girl, Peter resolved to help Anakin if and when they ever met.'Maybe I should save his mother? Or possibly set them both free early?" - Shuayeb_Ahmed3dCommented
magicians protect people? since when?
"I... I don't know. You're a magician, and magicians protect people, so why isn't anyone intervening? The city is literally overrun by gunfights and criminals, with people dying every hour..." - Shuayeb_Ahmed3dCommented
*scry I'm pretty sure I've never heard scurry before this fic
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did MHA have hidden identities?
"And your hidden identity…?" All Might asked. - Shuayeb_Ahmed3dCommented
eh no lemon? 🍋 nooooooo
As he woke up, Akaeru felt Himiko's nude body on top of him. Her cheeks were flushed, and a smile played at her lips even in her sleep. - Shuayeb_Ahmed3dCommented
*from her
Professor Veronica Raskalov was a blonde-haired, blue-eyed Russian who looked like she was 25 years old. If he got his mastery in his twenties, he was truly extremely talented. And she had undoubtedly earned a place at the top of the list of the hottest women I've ever seen at Hogwarts. Long blonde hair, blue eyes and a perfect hourglass figure; While I was thinking how beautiful she was and I was pretty sure that every guy in the class thought the same as me. Something else caught my attention. Normally voxnaturae did not fully understand people's emotions. But there was something strange about Professor Raskalov. I could feel a wild instinct radiating from him. Before I could make sense of this feeling I felt from Professor Raskalov, the professor had finished the roll call and started speaking. - Shuayeb_Ahmed3dReplied to emir_adar
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Zeoticus: Then yours will be Theo.