Comments of chapter undefined of Dragon Ball: Saga Of The Strongest Human

Thanks for the chapter and talking about dragon balls like they are some random marbles loudly in public is pure stupidity.

Pls pls pls no passive mc

his mother's mouth need to be locked!~

Hmm, here come the obnoxious fillers.

ah yes, if i overheard a group of 8 year olds talking about magic wish dragons i would toootally believe it........

the only thing I strongly disapprove for now is his age Why the **** they are talking like teenagers? It can't be that all of his friends are reincarnated too? and lolicons too?

Thanks for the story up till now, I recommend at some point going back and working on building/developing the character of his friends. They are unrealistically intelligent for their age, and they make your MC look like a passive little b.itch.

fking retard mc....yes go tell whole world about dragon balls

this dialogue is really terrible. I get why Darc talks like a teenager, but his friends should only be eight years old.

Human greed -_- MC shouldn't have told them about the dragon balls.

Hope they die and cant reincarnate

.... ...... .. .... ... the level of dumb rose so high that I think we reachdd Kami's lookout during the conversation.

since eternal youth and immortality are Blacklisted wishes for the MC... Maybe wish for Hyper regeration? Like Buu. But without the bubble gum.

lol what if his friend told other people what an idiot mc just inciting greed of people by telling dragonball hais

stupid talk about random dragon ball . . .

Thnx for chapter!~ Will his friends grow and become strong or smart scientists? or useful at all? If they are just normal people then it's gonna be difficult for Darc to have them around in his adventures, soon he will most likely have to fight frieza or cell or even an unknown enemy, just don't make them like yamcha where he stops training pls

yo we dont care about his friends theyre distractions

A novel idea to make a new arc with differnt characters, not seen much by other DBZ fanfics

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