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  • HeartFlame
    HeartFlame19d
    Commented

    Another OC it seems Now that I think about it he has to steal that kid quirk otherwise he won't live long

    Ch 3 CH. 3: Escape
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    BNHA : I Became Nine
    Anime & Comics · Mario_0000
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  • HeartFlame
    HeartFlame9mth
    Commented

    a pity it's just a doll

    Ch 2 The Doll
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    Living in Fantasy
    Realistic · AzureRaven69
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  • HeartFlame
    HeartFlame10mth
    Replied to Cartouk

    1488

    Firstly, the family members were natural financial experts. Even the most brilliant genetics expert couldn't find out why this family's members were so talented in handling money, and none of the family members was an exception for over a dozen generations.
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    Super Gene Optimization Fluid
    Sci-fi · 9 lightyears per second
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  • HeartFlame
    HeartFlame10mth
    Commented

    Yeah no, Christianity it's what you are looking for that or Islam, heck even Buddism fits more, Judaism in the end is a etnic religion only for the jews they don't proselytize

    "Of all world religions, Christianity and Judaism arguably had the most evidence as grounds for their faith. We tie their faith to actual history, preserved literature and even to the accurate prophecies fulfilled in their teachings. I just explained that the Romans, Assyrians, and Babylonians took them into captivity and all the actions of those nations were somehow prophesized forty to a hundred years before it actually happened."
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    New Game+
    Sci-fi · Rapture_Tales
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  • HeartFlame
    HeartFlame10mth
    Commented

    Of course they did their modis operandi isn't much different from the aliens those who notice are quickly disposed or and smeared

    "Those were the most powerful nations. But no. Assyria and Babylon are gone, Rome and Greece have fallen from its original power. I'm talking about the Jews. They continued to exist regardless of the fact that all of those nations you mentioned waged war against them."
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    New Game+
    Sci-fi · Rapture_Tales
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  • HeartFlame
    HeartFlame10mth
    Commented

    The aliens are the good guys?

    "Who would have thought that Seeker's strange orders would surface this early? To think that most Aragarian human trafficking operations were targeting the Jews?"
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    New Game+
    Sci-fi · Rapture_Tales
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  • HeartFlame
    HeartFlame10mth
    Commented

    a right wing party that doesn't want to arrest people? This is like their bread and butter, in what way are they right? lol

    Ch 4 3-taking the parliament
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    marvel's dictator
    Movies · NoDress
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  • HeartFlame
    HeartFlame1yr
    Commented

    There's was one of those stories with Mom, Brother and Sister, bro got both pregnant and mom divorced the husband to live with the son Can't find it anywhere

    Ch 1 Mom Takes a Ride
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    Different Sex Story
    Others · CopyKatto
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  • HeartFlame
    HeartFlame1yr
    Commented

    I really disliked the League power up, if you want them stronger then use the comics way, I mean there is tons of stronger versions out there, I don't know, I just really dislike they are Ki Practioners now

    Ch 64 Time Travel
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    Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)
    Anime & Comics · Draugzel
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  • HeartFlame
    HeartFlame1yr
    Commented

    You are still trying to make her Will 2 even with actor revelation thing At this point I would prefer her to be a trophy wife or something along that lol

    Ch 225 MHS - Chapter 222
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    My Hollywood System
    Movies · DreamThree
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  • HeartFlame
    HeartFlame1yr
    Commented

    No after-credits scene?

    Ch 214 MHS - Chapter 211
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    My Hollywood System
    Movies · DreamThree
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  • HeartFlame
    HeartFlame1yr
    Commented

    No, the problem with June is how you developed her, just stop her trying to be like Will Stop with her little dramas

    [No]
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    My Hollywood System
    Movies · DreamThree
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  • HeartFlame
    HeartFlame1yr
    Posted

    Release the final chapters it's been almost a month already Did you drop at the last second? wtf I don't if the delay is on purpose and the translator is trolling or it's a bug

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    The Legend of Futian
    Eastern · Jing Wuhen
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  • HeartFlame
    HeartFlame1yr
    Commented

    This is Sam Raimi Spiderman Edited/improved, right? I really dislike MJ in those movies

    Ch 193 MHS - Chapter 191
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    My Hollywood System
    Movies · DreamThree
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  • HeartFlame
    HeartFlame1yr
    Replied to Monarch_Ash

    Which is fine the problem is when you can clearly feel how unnatural and how much the author hand changed the flow of the novel's world An example of that would be in anime how a smart character IQ suddenly drops in order to comit a mistake The sudden change can be annoying

    Ch 183 MHS - Chapter 181
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    My Hollywood System
    Movies · DreamThree
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  • HeartFlame
    HeartFlame1yr
    Commented

    A pity that the novel has been dropped

    Ch 29 I
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    Gone 11183
    Book&Literature · NTR_is_trash
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  • HeartFlame
    HeartFlame2yr
    Commented

    Why on God's Earth would he get rid of the "MC" he literaly did nothing to him He is acting exactly like a soon-to-be-dead young master for treasures

    Ch 17 Simpification
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    I am the young master
    Eastern · Amiro0o
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  • HeartFlame
    HeartFlame2yr
    Commented

    >trash talks Arrogant Young Masters >is planning to eventualy do the same thing as them except the reason is different Just leave the "MC" alone lol, for someone supposedly well-read in Chinese novels he is a bit slow

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    I am the young master
    Eastern · Amiro0o
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  • HeartFlame
    HeartFlame2yr
    Replied to Mr_Lonely_001

    Think of Tracer's dash(Overwatch)

    Rein's face grew a tense frown. His father, Drevius Alister, was a master dual-swordsman and a 12th prestige Ranger. He was the strongest Ranger at the time, and he donned the name of "Timeless Blitz". His Spring was the ability to hop forward in time, allowing him to dodge incoming attacks and surprise enemies, which was inherited by Leona. He truly was an unrivaled fighter, which was why Rein never accepted his cause of death. He was pronounced dead 7 years ago in the Elven Forest after he was sent there on a mission. A forest fire had started in the area where he and his group were. None of the bodies were found. What they found in their place was a gargantuan crater, at least a mile in diameter, and 50 feet deep. Rein's mother disappeared shortly after, abandoning her two children. One was 16 years old, and the other was 3.
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    Inverse System
    Fantasy · Wizzez
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  • HeartFlame
    HeartFlame2yr
    Posted

    One word to describe this novel would be: Childish Even when there's supposed to be heavy drama you just don't care because there's barely any character development and when you think that finally, the character will grow up he "resets" and do the same mistakes again The Vorgen Rescue Arc it's one of the worst ones I ever read, after all, they are gone throughout the characters are still dumb as if they were in chapter 1, what looked like an easy mission turned difficult because of low IQ and "coincidences" Now let me talk about those coincidences, every novel be xianxia/wuxia or isekai has a trope that is fine by itself but this author overuses it so much that it quickly becomes annoying, in this case hiding strength and splitting up, even there is no place for that to happen the author manages to do that to bring tension to the story. The problem with that premise is that is reached the point that of Diabolus ex Machina. The multiple perspectives: Honestly if feels like the author wants to all plot point be connected and everything has to move on at the same time, it feels draggy because it's slowing down much of the story/character development, not everything has to connected, stop interrupting the flow of the ARC with more plot points. I personally feel like the author wants an "Avengers Assemble!" ending with every plot point and character in the end on a free for all fight against the big bad guy

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    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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