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Yeah no, Christianity it's what you are looking for that or Islam, heck even Buddism fits more, Judaism in the end is a etnic religion only for the jews they don't proselytize
Of course they did their modis operandi isn't much different from the aliens those who notice are quickly disposed or and smeared
The aliens are the good guys?
No, the problem with June is how you developed her, just stop her trying to be like Will Stop with her little dramas
Which is fine the problem is when you can clearly feel how unnatural and how much the author hand changed the flow of the novel's world An example of that would be in anime how a smart character IQ suddenly drops in order to comit a mistake The sudden change can be annoying
>trash talks Arrogant Young Masters >is planning to eventualy do the same thing as them except the reason is different Just leave the "MC" alone lol, for someone supposedly well-read in Chinese novels he is a bit slow
Think of Tracer's dash(Overwatch)
One word to describe this novel would be: Childish Even when there's supposed to be heavy drama you just don't care because there's barely any character development and when you think that finally, the character will grow up he "resets" and do the same mistakes again The Vorgen Rescue Arc it's one of the worst ones I ever read, after all, they are gone throughout the characters are still dumb as if they were in chapter 1, what looked like an easy mission turned difficult because of low IQ and "coincidences" Now let me talk about those coincidences, every novel be xianxia/wuxia or isekai has a trope that is fine by itself but this author overuses it so much that it quickly becomes annoying, in this case hiding strength and splitting up, even there is no place for that to happen the author manages to do that to bring tension to the story. The problem with that premise is that is reached the point that of Diabolus ex Machina. The multiple perspectives: Honestly if feels like the author wants to all plot point be connected and everything has to move on at the same time, it feels draggy because it's slowing down much of the story/character development, not everything has to connected, stop interrupting the flow of the ARC with more plot points. I personally feel like the author wants an "Avengers Assemble!" ending with every plot point and character in the end on a free for all fight against the big bad guy