Einlion
Well you go big or you go home and you have certainly gone big, not that I’m complaining. Matter of fact I commend you for not excluding girls because ‘the harem is to large’ or ‘you can’t write a good story if it is a harem’. Honestly I’m in the mind of having a big harem or none at all yah know, 5 or more girls else a harem is pointless in my opinion
the brothers are right ein, you have created the best harem of all, they are unique, sweet, with personality, with their own thoughts and desires, and all continue to develop as a character, for this and many, I respect you deeply, without talking about the development of vahn, with the if you went hahaha, the surprise in this chapter was epic, lulune is the bravest girl in all danmachi, tell that to vahn in the face, if that is not courage, then I do not know what it is, she and rufina could be great friends hahaha
Vahn needs to increase his brain processing power. So he can be like Braniac 12 of DC Comics: able to run 12 different levels of thinking at the same time...it would help alot with his ability to sort data and relationships...he's already at level 2, cuz he's running 2 thoughts with 2 avatars...just 10 more and he can be as smart as Braniac 12...muahahahah!!!
So far you have been doing well with the harem Ein. The problem with most stories is that the girls eventually lose meaning and simply become trophies for our MC to collect. That isn't the case here, you give each girl their own significance and we can feel their importance in Vahn's life. That's why I don't mind at all that the harem is growing in size
Honestly, I'd rather Lilune get shut down before it even starts because: 1. The harem's already big enough, there's barely enough screentime for all of them. 2. As I am sure you realised that I am speaking for a lot of people that while this Danmachi harem is great, we'd like to also see Vahn get romantically involved with A LOT of other characters in other records, like your example, Saber. 3. Lilune so far gives me the impression of that annoying friend who pesters you way too much. I honestly would rather other records' heroines being in Vahn's harem, so please don't make the harem here too big and then ignore possible future romantic developments for future girls in other records.
In which universe of the nasuverse is vahn going to go? For the reminder they are all connected though akashia and the akashic records and some character like Zelretch should be able to travels between them Tsukihime? Garden of Sinners? Fate (Stay Night? Unlimited Blade Works? Heaven Fell? Zero? Apocrypha? Grand Order? Prisma Illya? Extra? Extra CCC?)? Yes i love the nasuverse 😀