Reviews of 日廁所昂首熱褲

A really good one! ! totally recommended! ! The writing quality is amazing and the way author described the emotions its . .wow. .amazing !

It's really a nice book. I love the title and the plot is amazing. The Author really did a great job in writing this book. The characters are kinda interesting. Keep up with the good work.

I've the read the work so far and I must you have a nice storyline but there were some errors you need to watch out for. I actually enjoyed reading, you're doing great ✌️❤️

Hello and an honest review from me. The MC has a likeable personality but one suggestion is that you may put a punctuation after the dialogue (e.g. "You know," she said). But you don't need to put comma if there's '? or !' symbols. Overall great work author👍🏻

I really like your book, it's actually the first time I'm reading it but I really enjoyed it. Nice work. You really are a good author, I'll love to read more of your book. Keep writing.

Honestly there are a lot of grammatical errors here author , i encourage you to thoroughly go through your book or let other people read it and correct the grammar before publishing your work , but i give you thumbs up for the storyline , it is indeed a good story for one to read

Honestly, the start was confusing, the sudden pov shifts and the messy punctuations, however, I would still give this book a try as I was curious with the blurb. Also, I think the story is too fast-paced, there are already a lot of clues given in the first two chapters without the proper world/character background. Lastly, please set the proper nouns to title case. For the grammar mistakes, please use free online grammar checking tools to help with the typos and grammar, this is the method I use to proofread my work before publishing it, I got this advise to a fellow webnovel author as well. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the author's growth here in the platform. Keep writing!