Review Detail of Missy_Castillo in 日廁所昂首熱褲

Honestly, the start was confusing, the sudden pov shifts and the messy punctuations, however, I would still give this book a try as I was curious with the blurb. Also, I think the story is too fast-paced, there are already a lot of clues given in the first two chapters without the proper world/character background. Lastly, please set the proper nouns to title case. For the grammar mistakes, please use free online grammar checking tools to help with the typos and grammar, this is the method I use to proofread my work before publishing it, I got this advise to a fellow webnovel author as well. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the author's growth here in the platform. Keep writing!