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An interesting story of two people who don't want to have anything to do with the other one. While neither of them have a say in the matter, they each have strong personalities. The start of the story is intriguing, even a bit scary, and there's already so many questions raised in a few chapters! It's quite addictive, and you can't hekp but wonder what will happen next! Great find!
Great story all in all. Great world background. Amazing writing. Fantastic dialogue. It's also a realistic story that shows the flaws of the times and society. The only thing I would suggest is to add more description of how the characters look. Tell me what their hair looks like. Tell me about their skin color and eye color. Tell me about how they're built. Also describe the weather a bit more. Make me feel like I'm there. You did everything else so well, that I won't hold it against you in the review but that is my suggestion. I read the first ten chapters, but for some reason that's not coming up in my review.