A very weird sorta style of writing which is nice, the characters seem to be different and entertaining which is very important. The story is offbeat which always add

an interesting novel with very authentic characters. the use of profanity is nice giving a more down to earth reaction which is unique. all though the character doesn't feel like she has much to them

I know a lot of people don't enjoy long paragraphs but man I love them, especially when they're worth the read. The only problem is you need catch the attention of the reader more yk.

I got a bit confused (i haven't watched the anime yet) but wow I was able to get invested because of the quality of the writing. Sometimes it was jarring to see the different styles of words but I guess they were comedic

It has a very provincial style of writing which is great. Nothing wrong at all with the pacing, characters. The only problem is it may lack depth which is fine for a web novel but with your skills, you can definitely get a published book

This novel has everything man I must read, that scene with the french toast is perfect as well. and it has well-rounded characters and an interesting plot

nice

yeah my apologies with the grammar, not the best speller, but I'm working on the next chapter which will realise in a few minutes

Wow I love the plot twist in this story, it gets very twisty but the main thing is the twits work. Oh and the power part is really I'm interested to see how that goes

hey i was wondering if you could review my book as well

interesting plot which is differently unique which I respect. The wording is lengenthy and this goes to its advantage as it explores the nature of corruption and this prison

it's nice to see a compact story with likeable characters, I'm very interested to see how this plays out in future chapters. It also grabs you straight away which is nice

An interesting start to the novel which absolutely will hook you in wanting more. It is fairly obvious what this is influenced(just look at the cover). it is able to successfully bring in new and fresh to the table which is neat

nice intro and really good hook as well

yooo she already going there

she do be a tsundere

decent book, I enjoy the feel of the world all through the prologue felt like it dragged on but nonetheless still interesting. it's very mature which is cool

yeah but thanks for the comments they were really valid criticisms

the character didn't have much to them I feel, but mind you I've only just started so I'll update my review as i read more

wow didn't expect that blew me away with how engaging the story was, the opening doesn't fluff around and catches straight to the catch which I thought was cool. looking forward to catching up