'Transported to another world' a phrase you're all too familiar with. Such a story is usually followed with a lackluster plot, weak characters, and frequent exposition dumps that are supposed to be world building. But stick with this one. It could easily become a published book series. I would recommend this wholeheartedly to people who love detail and explanations. A genius is thrown into a feudal world with witches. So he begins an industrial revolution in a small mining town and attempts to save witches from discrimination in a backwards society. Boring extra: The story is intriguing and develops at a meticulous pace. The world is built slowly and emphasizes locations well, attaching events to certain places and giving them a character of there own (king's city and its underground, Port of Clearwater's pirate paradise, the tribes of Ironsand city). That being said the story position (the relation of locations to each other) sometimes confuses the reader. The description is just shy of a complete picture in your mind, making it necessary to glance at a map to gain the whole picture. The character design is splendid. Personalities are well displayed and developed; however, the descriptions of characters are few and far between. Apart from hair, rarely does the author delve into detail of a character. The lack of descriptions makes it hard to tell characters apart in your head, harmful thing to such a brilliant story. Overall, if you read 40 chapters then you're forever hooked.
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