Review Detail of WidestGrin in Dreadful Radio Game

Horrible update schedule. Promised 5 chapters per week but not a single one has come in two weeks. The story is good but could do with more descriptions about the character as he seems pretty interesting in a twisted way. In fact what the story lacks the most is the details about the background and the thoughts and feelings of the main character. Besides these two points the story makes a good read although it has a lot more place for improvement. The storyline is well done but the way of writing doesn't bring out the essence of the story. This needs a lot more work to let it show its fullest potential.