Review Detail of MarkoCapco in Immortal Mortal

A lot of people may not like Goose Five because of hIs stupid endings and because some parts of his stories seem unplanned. But Goose Five is still one of my favorite online novel authors due to the fact that he has amazing control over the readers’ emotions. Especially in this novel, the way the characters interact with each other, the way how the MC is always being low-key then sometimes becomes the brightest star in the universe. It’s simply unlike any other authors, I’ve read MW and TMW just before this and I can really see the difference, I would say that those two have a more “complicated plot” than Immortal Mortal but what I don’t like about those 2 is that the author is not good in controlling the emotions of the readers, sometimes it becomes very nice to read because the author will follow a usual trend and sometimes it becomes very boring when the author breaks that trend. An example is when the MC is high key 90% of the story and you get used to it and expect more of it, but the next moment he becomes veery low key breaking that trend and then the author makes you wait a long ass time before he becomes very high key again for a short moment, its suddenly the opposite of what the author already made you love about the novel. This novel follows the same formula throughout the story which is a very good thing. the author never makes the reader suffer for deviating from what made you love the story in the first place. Most authors focus on the beginning and ending but Goose Five focuses on the journey itself, the day to day interactions, the relationships between the characters, and in my opinion that is the most important element so that the story never becomes boring.