If you can handle the cringelord moments, and fedora-capped romance, there's a great story here. The world building is interesting, and the mystery keeps you curious. Unfortunately progression of strength follows problem -> powerup instead of powerup -> problem which is my preferred method of tension. Overall it's still satisfying, just held back a little by the author.
Chen Dong
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