Review Detail of Universal_Foodie in Springtime Shinobi

Honest review: I think many people leaving reviews are being too harsh and by all means too spoiled. The pace of the novel is solid; the greatest enemy of an author is lack of material. For the author to keep it entertaining and deepen the characters beyond the 2D traits that we already know about them, while making minor advancements in the plot each chapter should be the goal. I think people need to wake up and realize that this isn’t a crack fic that’s gonna end in 20-30 chapters and it has the potential to go quite far. So instead of being dopamine wish-fulfillment addicts; enjoy a refreshing plot that is new. As for the whole infinite tsukiyomi belief; JUST BECAUSE THE MC THINK THAT; it doesn’t mean that it’s true. As for the people spamming “dropped”; stop doing it. It’s already hard enough to find good fics here, it’s gonna be harder if every budding author is demoralized WITH EVERY CHAP THEY PUT OUT. I think this belongs on Fanfiction.net or even AO3.net. I don’t say this lightly at all. I think this is a great fanfic with a great idea and a great main character that interacts with plot in a realistic way. Now dear author as someone who has written some fics that have gone to perform well on this platform. Don’t be demoralized, just realize that the people who enjoy your writing are a lot more than the people commenting “dropped” because of the infinite tsukiyomi plot. I don’t know where you’re going with it and even with some predictions; I honestly don’t care as long as it’s something written well. I’m enjoying myself reading this fic and it’s something that I wasn’t expecting to binge on a random Tuesday morning. Keep going and I look forward to your next chaps and what your own unique spin brings to the Naruto fandom.