I can't say much, but the first few chapters don't look bad. I just hope the story doesn't fall off in the middle, or start giving away powers to the super OP protagonist at the beginning of the story. I'm really tired of Stories where characters are given the power to manipulate reality and they've only been in their new world for 2 minutes, or they're 3 or 4 years old and already the most powerful on the continent. I will be updating this, to see how the next chapters go in the next week.
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