webnovel

Review Detail of Hunter931 in Dreams of Stardom (Hollywood SI)

Review detail

Hunter931
Hunter931Lv141mthHunter931

Has great potential and I’m enjoying reading it, portraying a kid pretty well compared to other fanfics, can’t wait to see what other movies are next.

Dreams of Stardom (Hollywood SI)

FableWeaver

Liked by 1 people

LIKE

Replies3

Hunter931
Hunter931Lv14Hunter931

Bro, latest few chapters you’ve made him less mature and more arrogant, I hope you move past his phase during the Harry Potter movie due to having some friends his age from the filming.

FableWeaver:Thank you!
FableWeaver
FableWeaverAuthorFableWeaver

Thank you!

FableWeaver
FableWeaverAuthorFableWeaver

Arrogance is a common trait for most celebrities for a reason. They are put on a pedestal, every person beyond their immediate family admires them. I know it is an unlikable trait, but I'm building it up for a crucial scene I have in mind for the future of the story.

Hunter931:Bro, latest few chapters you’ve made him less mature and more arrogant, I hope you move past his phase during the Harry Potter movie due to having some friends his age from the filming.