Has great potential and I’m enjoying reading it, portraying a kid pretty well compared to other fanfics, can’t wait to see what other movies are next.
FableWeaver
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LIKEBro, latest few chapters you’ve made him less mature and more arrogant, I hope you move past his phase during the Harry Potter movie due to having some friends his age from the filming.
FableWeaver:Thank you!
Arrogance is a common trait for most celebrities for a reason. They are put on a pedestal, every person beyond their immediate family admires them. I know it is an unlikable trait, but I'm building it up for a crucial scene I have in mind for the future of the story.
Hunter931:Bro, latest few chapters you’ve made him less mature and more arrogant, I hope you move past his phase during the Harry Potter movie due to having some friends his age from the filming.