Review Detail of AlphaHost in Lord of Mysteries: The Stars Return

This is a good fanfic, the only problem i've noticed is translation quality tend to varey. sometimes I'ts good and sometimes I'ts bad. there was a bunch of chapters were i considered dropping it because the translation quality took a nose dive and then it got better again. Some confusion about names escpecially honorific names and the like. Otherwise contentwise I'ts very good