if only you had read 4 more lines dude... hahaha thanks for the laugh

to be fair, he had the ring for 70+ years and only suffered mild symptoms. I've seen plenty of those faces when out drinking, prob had to much elf wine

The translator gives minimal effort the cultivation levels constantly changes names sometimes english sometimes chinese and other times when discussing things the sentence goes like this... ''he spent decades in cultivation realm A in order to break through to cultivation realm A'' like dude atleast do a small check of what you are posting

It was a fun story untill it became a pronographic novel, where evry second or so chapter is an R18 skip chapter. Might be good for people who are looking for that. I'ts honestly just annyoing

I prefer it to dealing with actual problems, thanks

As a guy I've never felt jealousy for guys better looking then me, cuz there aren't any huehuehuehue.

i mean, he dosent need one. dont need to drink if you dont want to. Besides i'ts a perfectly good reason not to drink

Please let it be orc... kek

GENIUS, brb going to give harry potter a 2 star review because lord of the rings dont have house elves

I felt i should explain why i like the contents of the novel. i'ts slow, but not too slow or too fast you feel that theres actually a story here. I'ts not a fanfic where the main character goes dudududud max level woha that was easy. It feels as close the lord of mysteries as i feel most fanfics can achieve. The MC needs to use his brain I don't feel like the world revolves around him as much as most fanfics and It hasent turned into a 16 year old wet dream where the only thing is about sex.

This is a good fanfic, the only problem i've noticed is translation quality tend to varey. sometimes I'ts good and sometimes I'ts bad. there was a bunch of chapters were i considered dropping it because the translation quality took a nose dive and then it got better again. Some confusion about names escpecially honorific names and the like. Otherwise contentwise I'ts very good

did you just give a review where you gavie it a 3 star because other people dont put romance in their novels and you want one? KEK touch some grass

Most of this novel pretty good, however I do feel the author uses too much drama in his writing. Its way to heavy handed to feel natural while the autor makes me want to read more, i find myself reading despite the writing instead of because of the writing.the description of ''primal hunger'', ''lust for power'', ''unwawering determination'', ''the weight of his extorions bearing down upon him like a heavy burden'' the author should really try the less is more approach. At this point it's tiresome to read and makes me roll my eyes. every sentence is trying to make it epic and makes it seem like im reading a 15 years old diary of how he wants to rule the world lol. I alose wanna say, while it dosent enter the realm of beeing cringe, it does come very close. As i've said less is often times more and it would stick more if it would come once in a while instead of evry other paragraph. However depsite this its a well done fanfic that keeps me intrested and the story has potential to be even better,

yea, no orginization could function like this, it would implode. The issue is the higher ups would have to come from somewhere in the future and what happens when the next generation of leaders activily resent the orginization. The only way this would work if you were trying to make mindless attack dogs, and even that would be far more effective to treat them better so they have loyalty. This from what i've read so far seems like a plot hole. Like an example is harry potter, the reason death eaters first followed voldemort was becuse he was charasmatic and had a cause they belived in, this was how he gained followers.

''technically disease is Murder by Mother Nature'' you are really using that technically strongly here, Murder, by definition: the unlawful premeditated killing of one human being by another. This trait could be worded better yes, but more then likely this had more to do with diffrences in language then anything

i mean the author prob has a skewed point of wiev when comparing homelander to superman, superman is a nigh imortal god without his weakness to kryptonite and magic lol, and when seeing comparisons to homlander the author might have been a bit confused, and forgot that homlander is just a really cheap knock off of superman

the short of this review: very good translation and good story. this is a great translation, honestly i'd never have guessed it was translated if not stated by the translator I can see no akward phrases or conversations. its a great fan fiction Not to mention the story is really fun and even somone who has no knowledge of leauge of legends or any of its spin offs can enjoy it. It takes some enjoyment away not knowing the champions but honestly not much and this is comming from someone who hasent played leauge in 7 years.

I can fix her!

I understand, but you need to realize that the synopsis is where the reader decides if he or she wants to read the story you write, and showing indifference is bad, no matter the reason. If you aren't good at synopses, get better. It's here you should show why the reader should be interested. You are selling your story, and when I see 'I don't care,' first impressions are important, and this is a wrong one. and if you are spending ''hours'' writing this story why cant you spend 10 minuttes introdoucing your fanfic. right? when you say im spending hours on this story and ofcourse i care, but your unwilling to spend a bit of extra time making sure your synopsis is good? you see where the logic fails? anyway good luck on writing