Good start, interesting buildup, the emotions are great. The writing style is pretty good, feels smooth. Keep up the good work author! [img=update]
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LIKE@Romance_guy I am so sorry that I deleted your comment by mistake. Well, I am new, and I thought about deleting mine comment but ended up deleting yours. :)
Blunder_Master:Not yet, but later for sure. I mean, how can a man not have a romance in his story?