Blunder_Master
I am just a fresh writer and English is not my mother tongue, so when you read my stuff and find it lacking in some aspect or can be improved then your constructive comments are always welcome.
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Blunder_Master27dPostedI have read till the 9th (latest) chapter, and I really love the story till now. I like the authors way of storytelling, there is no info dumping, dialogues are clear and MOST importantly I absolutely love the idea where Arthur will have to travel to different worlds inside the book to become powerful. I am really excited to see how the story progresses further in the upcoming chapters. [ New Title Acquired:- Peerless Librarian Loyal Fan]
- Blunder_Master27dCommented
Finally the mana is here. lets goo
['Mana' has increased 0 >>> 10] - Blunder_Master27dCommented
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[Congratulations! Quest has been completed!] - Blunder_Master27dCommented"Do I look like a joke to all of you?" Arthur's voice caused them all to shiver, as he walked forward, with both his hands behind his back. The crowd of soldiers, fearfully split, creating a path for him.
- Blunder_Master27dCommented"YOU?! You're our new lead- HAHAHAHA!!" One of them held his stomach as he was laughing so hard, tears were beginning to appear in his eyes.Â
- Blunder_Master27dCommented'Red team okay.' Arthur nodded, calming his beating heart. He hadn't been around this much blood in a very long time.
- Blunder_Master27dCommented'I'm alive! Woopwoop!' Arthur sighed in relief falling back into the soft embrace of his hospital bed. The Hospital he was in was probably for Hunters, they had special medicines and potions capable of even regenerating limbs.
- Blunder_Master27dCommented
Run for your life.
'This was a mistake. RUUNNNN!' Arthur's eyes widened as the beast that was enjoying its human feast, slowly showed its bloodshot eyes towards him. With a few bats of its wings it had already taken into the air. - Blunder_Master27dCommentedHe had to take care of the Library whilst that annoying old woman was away. Arthur scowled, as a wrinkly annoying face appeared in his head, she cackled like a witch flicking through the money in her hand.
- Blunder_Master27dCommentedArthur slowly opened his eyes, his breathing raggedy and his clothes drenched in his own sweat. The view in front of him caused a slither of cold to travel down his spine, his face ashen in shock.
- Blunder_Master28dReplied to Forteller
yeah, I mean what can you expect from a cub just hatched 2 months without any fighting experience.đ
"Luna, I am sorry but we can't run away and will have to fight the monsters and I can't do it alone so I will require your help to defeat them. You will help right?" Evan asked as he picked up Luna. - Blunder_Master29dReplied to Romance_guy
- Blunder_Master1mthPosted
Damn.. I mean for real. I have seen Pokémon from the beginning till the end and as I read this I can visualize every single thing like its happening in front of me. Honestly, I like this very much and writing style and dialogue are also very clear, love it, FULL MARKS. EXCEPT FOR UPDATE STABILITY MAN YOU GOTTA PUMP MORE OF THIS STUFF.
- Blunder_Master1mthReplied to KetchupxD
- Blunder_Master1mthCommented
Hey everyone; it's Me, the Author! I seriously hope you guys enjoy the story as you read it. Also be sure to comment on the sections you liked/hated so I get to know about your opinion which helps me improve the story. Also, I know my writing skills are on the weaker side but i am working on it, so you guys just hang in there!
Ch 1 Evan's Hardships - Blunder_Master1mthReplied to bearateme_
Thanks for the review :)
This book has been deleted. - Blunder_Master1mthReplied to veejuon
well, it's my very first novel and non-native English does its wonders but as they say, "you learn as you work! " I am also working on it and will make the changes as I get more skilled with time.
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