Review Detail of LordSatan666 in MHA: The Green Blur
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there are a couple of glaring issues that can be fixed one in the beginning if you use a character with a truth detector quirk they would determine izukus dad not to have done the crime so you should have both parents killed otherwise that's just a big plot hole which would require rewriting some of this but the more you write using broken logic in the story the more you would need to change for the edited version should you write one
MHA: The Green Blur
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like there's no disrespect but it needs a rewrite to be better like premise is cool izuku with speed force cause he definitely would use it better than alot of speedsters plus material science is more advanced in mha so momo could make materials that would be perfect for speedster until he learned how to make speedforce constructs